I loved this so much it's ridiculous! It was very refreshing, especially since I feel like I haven't read a good Jack/Ana fic in forever. Thank you so much for this! I sincerely hope you write more. Please do! Even more of this particular story, though it is a one-shot, the idea is just so original I would love to see it expanded into a full-fleged story.

I love this idea and this pairing!

i loved it! really good! :D

very nice!i rather like this pairing!well i think jack got what he deserved!well done!

Ah! Sparramaria! *squeals in happiness* Okay, okay enough fangirling. You're grammar is good as far as I can tell and everyone seems to be in character. Thank you for writing this wonderful peice. I really hope you do more.

~hurricane1714