UPDATE OR I SWEAR I WILL KILL YOU! *ahems* Please don't take that personally, I happen too be on of the few R/V fans alive and this is the best one I have read in awhile...So if you wouldn't mind Updating!? Please?!

"Koboi had made her want to lock up anyone with an IQ higher than 140." (chapter two)
I'd better watch out, then!

I love this story! I read the first two chapters on FanGathering (my username there is Julissa Holly Fowl) and I liked it then. I never found time to read the rest, but I'm glad I did so now!

ZOMG AN UPDATE! *happy*

ZOMG EVIL CLIFFIE! ***

How could you? A cliffie, at such a crucial point?!? There go all our expectations that this story wouold be a relatively short one. There appears to be something going on in the past...

Root and Vinyaya = squee. Nice, believable, IC interaction. *clap clap clap* and I'm eager to see where Minerva/Trouble's plot is gong.

UPDATE SOON

Please, no dancing or I swear to Frond I'm not giving you any nice reveiws. it 's cool

OH MY GOODNESS! What will happen next?!?!?!?

Actually, I'm intrigued. JV is one of the most amazing pairings of all times, so this story got me hooked. And plus Artemis isn't in it. OK, that may sound weird, but I kind of tire of reading about Artemis after a while.

Anywho... awesome story. Awesome soundtrack. You rock. FAVED!

-FC

Alright, I'm through chapter 7. All in one sitting. You owe me an update.

Read the first 3 chapters so far.

Nice story :). Tieve seems a little out of charecter for a demon...her English is too modern, imo. Other than that, great story. Keep it up.

UPDATE! UPDATE! You left a cliffhanger, you evil author!

That was a brilliant plot twist with Vinyaya meeting past!Root, my immediate reaction was *facepalm* =P I'm glad that you've got your muse back because this is an amazing story.

Hope you update soon! And I'll give you a box to keep your muse in so it can't run away again =D *hands box*

-Jess-

What does this have to do with Trouble?

UPDATE!

Hey, so we finally get to meet Caballine soon huh? Lol! Looking forward to it. Please update soon!

Another great chapter! And I can't cook too! I cant even fry an egg. Hahas. I can only make sandwiches. Oh. Or is Tieve pronounced as Tye-ve?

Nice story. Your idea of using minor characters instead of using either Arty or Holly is really great! And the way you portray Vinyaya and set up the plot is brilliant! And is Tieve pronounced as Tee-ve?

Great chapter and story! One of the best that I have read! Keep updating and keep up the great work! I'm dying to find out what will happen in the next chapter!(: