I loved it it was to cute and sweet I love your writing

Ah..that was totally wonderful.

I really enjoyed this.

Your stories are always great! This one was definitely adorable and was a bit of a deviation from the norm.
I like how Brock finally gets some spotlight and a girlfriend to make it sweeter.
Ah yes, palletshipping hints. Those were not hints, they were signs! xD But I still love them, no complaints here!

BTW I love that song. I just haven't had a chance to download it yet...TT-TT

Chalk up another master piece! This was beautifuly written! Awesome job!

I would like it if you would write what happened between Ash and Gary.

That was good! I am now a shipper of Brock x Gary's older sister! A cute het pairing is good every so often. Of course including the Pallet ship was the awesome bonus. Lol.

Of course I want more shonen-ai but this was so cute! You should write some more stories like this though.

And I want to see what went on with Ash and Gary during the party! =D

*whistles* you should, you should write about what happened at the party with the Shis! And forgive me for ditching you last night...I...Harvest Moon is addicting...@_@ it is! and I can't play it today because I'm going back to school and I have to do some of my work...TOT

You'd never expect a farming game/dating sim to be like crack, but it is...in the worst of ways...I stayed up till 2:30 in the morining playing it. I'm almost to fall! And the guy I'm getting to marry is already at 6 hearts (max is 8)! Now, if I only worked on the Harvest Sprite quest, I could progress in the game...

...but anyway! This fic was definitely your best yet; I could see this happening in the show! Behind the scenes, of course, so as not to scare parents, but still there. ^^