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brakken 2008-11-02 . chapter 1
Hehehehehehehe...that's so quietly hilarious. And yes, that was intentional phrasing; it means that it's only funny when you think about it, so the back of your mind is cracking up but your mouth is just smiling that secretive little smile. That's how it is for me, at least...why is everyone looking at me like I'm crazy? But seriously, I would pay to hear the father banter that's going to ensue as soon as Inuyasha jr. pops out...it's gonna be fun, I can already tell.
Juls-emo 2008-10-26 . chapter 1
inuyasha's being nervos becoming father .. i missed this kinda fanfiction .. ^^ it's really cute, i like your writing style!
PnayBabyGurl 2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Inuyasha's right for doubting that Miroku would make the ideal role model. Haha But despite his flaws, Miroku does seem like a good father to his children. Again, thank you for writing these beautiful pieces. It makes dealing with the fact that there won't be anymore manga chapters, just a bit easier to bare. :)

-Mina
Dark-Lady-Shippo 2008-10-06 . chapter 1
inuysahs better find a better role model. lol
Lady Rini 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I love all your stories and poems, miroku acting as a role model that's horrible! I hope inuyasha's child is a girl so then it won't pick up any bad traits from mirouk.
Luna-Chan96 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
manga 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
“You’ll do fine, my friend. After all, you have me for a role model!”

*lol*
donaplaya 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Have mercy! Miroku as a role model? Run, InuYasha! RUN! ^_^
wbaker5286 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
i love the picture of inuyasha as a dad. i can feel the unusual thought processes whirling through his head at the idea of being a father. and miroku offering himself as a role model? it cracked me up.

thanks for another wonderful bit of continuation. you keep this story alive for so many of us.
BoredGirl17 2008-10-04 . chapter 1
Oh ya, a role model for not doing 'it' much.n.n
My-Only-Love 2008-10-04 . chapter 1
Well written, but Miroku as a role model? That's an interesting idea.
inuaiko 2008-10-04 . chapter 1
lol i don't think Miroku is much of a role model type ne? X3
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