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SOBs 4 Sirius 223
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
BAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT!
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
_Snicker_ Poor Fred!
qt4good
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Hahahaha.. Poor Fred!
It's adorable though! :)
Eusebius
2008-10-16 . chapter 1
Completely adorable; there's no way those kids wouldn't be a handful or five. Thanks for the chuckles. :)
remuslives
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
Lol, oh man, bet Mrs. Weasley would get a kick out seeing him get a taste of his own medicine. Great little fic!
BlessedMay
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
That was so adorable! I love how it just HAS to happen to Fred of all people!
TeddyBear 8P
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
hahaha lol thats funy! ;)
love it! ;)
WhoKnows15
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Wow. Hmm, the concept is really good, but it still seems like something is missing. The ending was a bit funny, like you rushed it a bit.
But i liked it anyway. :)
Samantha Delano Jackson se Teal'c O'Neill
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Best part.. Come on children we need to take Daddy to the hospital. I laughed so hard. Great job!
Arsenic Allure
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Mandy,

This story almost lacks something. I am not sure what it is, exactly. It seems incomplete, rushed or fabricated. Odd thing to say about fiction, that. At any rate, you could improve the flow.

The humour is there: had a grin on my face for Fred tasting his own medicine, playing the part of a hybrid cat-bird and experiencing a general sulk. He even has the chance to research the implications of combinations of his inventions that he may not have thought of before.

I do enjoy most of your other works. Keep it up, yes?

-AA-
Rob-girl
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. That was REALLY good. Extremely funny. I really enjoyed it. Great job. I can't wait to read more from you; we haven't seen you around in a while! Keep writing!
Kitty Bridgeta
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Lol! Feathers and a tail!
Well done
Indy-x
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
Paha! Incredibly funny! I don't usually read Fred/Hermione but, I may just start. I love this.
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