Poor, poor Elise. She lost her adoptive father and her freedom all in one day.

Uh-oh, looks like Sonic's not really happy to have Mr. Krabs in his castle!

While this is a very interesting take on Beauty and the Beast, I'm afraid there is so little detail that I can barely tell what's happening unless I see the clips of the movie. It goes by way too fast to be enjoyed. Maybe adding some actual detail on the place to help set the mood, and throwing in some sound effects will help. If you just leave telling the story to people talking then you're wasting a perfectly good chance to describe things around so that they will be more enjoyable.

I could only tell that basic things were happening, but I didn't know how the characters felt or what I was supposed to feel. I wasn't scared of the Werehog, all I heard were blank threats in my head. Sure, detail can degrade a story, but next to no detail makes it boring and plainly does not give any basis on how the imagination should go. I could read this whole thing and take it only as a tea party on a rainbow instead of a love story between a simple girl and a selfish beast.

IF you wanted this to go straight from imagination then there's really no point in writing it down, then, is there? Stories are meant to take someone to another world in their mind, not to take them somewhere they've already been with their own imagination. It's like giving sprinkles to someone who ordered an ice-cream cone.

There really is an amazing story you can place here, there is a possibility of me reading this story and feeling frightened by the Werehog so plainly that I would feel bad for Krabs. I could have a feeling of Pity or Elise and I could even understand the desperation from Bugs. But without the detail I have no clue how they feel, not the foggiest idea where they are, and a very unclear thought on how the story will go.

So, in a nutshell; ADD MORE DETAILS. Tell me how the characters are feeling, what they are thinking, what they taste, what the smell, all the things you get from being INSIDE the story! The things you could never get from just watching and hearing a film! That's the beauty of storytelling!

There are so many things you can do with this story! Don't you DARE squander your chance by giving us only talking!

Poor Elise... All she wanted to do was to save her adopted father.

This is awesome!! I love the Screw-ball thing with Bugs and Daffy!

Oh boy, Krabs is in trouble now!

This is awesome though!

Hey cute story!! I obviously don't care about SonicxElise either but as long as Sonic isn't with Amy, I'm okay with that.

Great choice on using Bugs and Daffy as Lumiere and Cogsworth!!

Oh dear. Poor Elise. Good job! Update soon!

Poor Elise...now that she's a prisoner. Hope you update on this...

Oh no! Sonic took Krabs away! This is bad for Elise. Hope you update soon!

Uh oh! Krabs is in trouble! Update soon!

Wow. Werehog Sonic? I'm not sure how this would turn out, but I think this parody could have a lot of potential...

Just one thing. When your doing description, try to cut it down into a few sentences instead of a putting it into a huge paragraph. Near the beginning, for instance.

But other than that, nice job! Please continue!

Werewolf Sonic eh? Interesting. Update soon!

I never heard of Elise but Werewolf Sonic? This should be interesting, plus I love that movie. So I'll keep an eye on this fic.

Look, I'm sorry, but this is getting rediculous. Would it be too much to ask that you actually COMPLETE one of your stories? Every story you've written now has only lasted one or so chapter, then you move on to another one. Would it hurt you too much to actually finish a story?

Also, rather than do a C'n'P, why not incorporate the characters personalities into the script? Just a suggestion.