 ButterflyMay 2009-01-11 . chapter 1I have read your stories before but didnt review( dunno why) but this story just compelled me to praise your imagination and writing ability.
Wonderful some lines gave me the biggest smiles. |
 humaniod.tears. 2008-11-29 . chapter 1nicely written as usual
i totally love how Hakkai is described...the type to strangle, politely threatening, logical and calculating...this story stays very true to the characters...Gojyo himself is very real in every sense...he is the 'im so hot' type of persona, n he also has that big brother, youth, boyish side...n he would definately ask Hakkai if he was ok, especially when Hakkai was acting different...
i absolutely adore how u incorporated the whole gang, plus Yaone and Jien...it totally fits how Sanzo would do that sort of stuff n the Goddess would totatlly run a S&M shop in her basement...
i think Gojyo's stuck on Hakkai...incredibly well written, lovely, descriptive, accurate, real
i commend you for ur accomplishment on staying true to the characters during this type of relationship...usually one character changes to accomadate the relationship, but this was seamless and flawless in design. im glad i read this, very glad.
again, wonderful job~! not enough words to express my joy at this fabulous fanfiction...a work of digital art, a textual masterpiece, a true artist's renedition |
 Mcky 2008-10-25 . chapter 1Good story. I especially like the banter between Sanzo and Gojyo. I was laughing out loud. |
 Stray Neko 2008-10-16 . chapter 1My goodness. That was incredibly sweet! I'm at a loss for what to say... Maybe I'll think of something and come back to comment. Thanks so much for sharing this. |
 Scrunchy 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Ah, I almost forgot how invigorating it was to read one of your pieces. Love it~ as usual. |
 UpperClassK9 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Hah, i like the part with Gojyo on the phone with Kanzeon. ^^ And the plan Sanzo hatched really does seem... Unsubtle. Remind me not to get someone with his personality if i need a security consultant. And it's nice to have you back, btw. ^^ |
 Bloody's soul 2008-10-06 . chapter 1yeah...*contented grin*
*slide off her chai with contented purrs*
that was good. |
 ShadeSpirit 2008-10-05 . chapter 1This was really good. The breaks in it do work, even if it does make it seem a little like multiple drabbles. Both Hakkai and Gojyo were adorable. |
 Devatron2000 2008-10-05 . chapter 1this was very fun to read thank you. |
 madammina 2008-10-05 . chapter 1That was VERY enjoyable. I'm not a big fan of Saiyuki AU stories, as I think the universe itself offers so many endless possibliities, but I really appreciated this one. You did a wonderful job with the formation of the relationship. Thanks for sharing with us! |
 Rosa Lui 2008-10-05 . chapter 1This = love. |
 Azamiko 2008-10-05 . chapter 1Sweet. |