 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 11Great work. I hope you continue at some point. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 10cute |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 9Didn't really expect him to change. Will we get to see Serena's parents? |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 8Nice chapter. Even though I am a SenshiXShitennous fan I think Rei and Andrew would make a cute couple. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 7Great to see Rei's thoughts in going home to the temple. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 6Getting good. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 5Glad Ami came around. _ |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 4Nicely written. If you ever get back to this try making the chapters a little longer. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 3Too short. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 2I really love what you have done with this story. |
 DavisJes 3/18/08 . chapter 1So Jupiter is dead? Seems like a great start to a story. Too bad it was never finished. |
 Marni 12/14/02 . chapter 11 This story is very exciting! |
 Adyen 12/13/02 . chapter 11 Would it be possible for a final-showdown kind of thing where Usagi is *forced* to created the Great Sleep? That would be quite interesting... But what really shocked me was the fact that Matchiko would actually do something like that without connecting the fact that Sailor Moon is possiblely Serenity... |
 Marni 10/18/02 . chapter 10 It was a very good chapter! Please include Darien's introduction to her family, that scene could be funny or serious. |
 Xelena 9/22/02 . chapter 8i like it so far. normally, i actually don't read G stories, but i like this one. |