I love the way you wrote this! :)

"What is a man, to a woman who has sweat and lost and bled for the strength to smile?"

What a powerful statement! Its meaning, not lost, but it seemed to repeat all the way from the beginning. I like the way how 'kunoichi' and 'woman' is emphasized. I also like it when you put a prompt like smile.

:)

Amazing.. as always...

I love your kunoichi fanfics! 3

wow

And yet not a single one of them had to struggle as hard for recognition as Naruto did.

Wheeee! Loved it! I especially liked this line:

She will know all your tricks, and know all your suffering, because it is her burden too.

I loved it!
Men are fools when they belittle women... no wonder they die.
Thanks for writing!
You did fair justice to all kunoichi
Oh, yes, smile :)

Aye aye sister! Woman kick butt!

Again. You astound me and me even proud(er) to be female.

This is good and I like it. Yeah, show them the true power of kunoichi (and woman, of course). Woman is stronger than they(man) think..

Beautiful writing. Poetic. :)

as i said before when i reviewed Sentaku, you gave me chills AGAIN! i seriously love you work!

There are phrases that I absolutely loved form this fanfic. You certainly have some poetic ability. There are images in this fiction that are wonderful, really beautiful. But I think that the fanfic overall lacked something. Maybe an appropiate structure that could convey a plot? There's no story behid this, and that's a shame, but I understand that maybe that wasn't the objective of the fanfiction... I really want to read something more structured from you really, I think you probably are an amazing writer.

I'll be reviewing you later!

I just realized I read a bunch of your stories and LOVED them, but I never favorited them. That, to me, is a biggie. So I'm going back and favoriting the ones I liked. :)

Goosebumps. Your stories give me goosebumps.

So much power in your words.