Name:

Age:

Hair:

Eye Color:

Personality:

Likes:

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Fear:

History: (Tell a little bit about your characters past!)

Why Did You Join TDI:

So if you get picked as I will announce in the next post on this story, reviews would be nice as I continue. Because everybody loves an extra push in the back of approval when everything seems to be going downhill.

So remember to do the skeleton and I cant wait to start writing about who wins the 100k! It could be your camper!

Name: Gabby

Age: 14

Hair: Long; Brown with Blonde highlights

Eye Color: Chestnut Brown

Personality: Caring, Attractive, Sweet, Can be bitchy,

Likes: Hanging out, Making new friends, Gifts, Electronics, Anything that has to do with what's in

Dislikes: Liars, Backstabbers, Being used, Getting made fun of

Fear: Detentions, Hard Schoolwork, Bugs, Sickness

History: At 3, I was put in an Honors class. Then by the time I was 6, I made straight A's, but had a bad conduct grade. At 8, I started to wear glasses. 5 years later, I started to wear braces. Now at 14, she is wearing contacts and getting her braces off in less than a year.

Why Did You Join TDI: To make more friends and to know more about people

Thanks for putting my charecter in. I like how you told how my brother was locked up. I think he does nedd a few more lines. All he said was “Nice to meet you to.” and “What?” I also I have a question. Are the others scared of me? I'm not sure but is that what you ment in this part?

"Francisco didn’t know that he would cause that much alarm and walked to the end of the line of campers. He stood next to Julie who was still searching through her bag for this so called ‘binding contract."

What I mean to say is that Nancy isn't depressed, she's just a little gloomy. Sorry if I sounded a little demanding in my last review.

Thank You for putting Nancy in! I am so excited.
Could you make her just a little bit happier towards the end like the nature is getting to her or something? You don't have to, it's just a suggestion.

I LUV it plz continue!

love it please conyinue!!

Awesome dude! You got Lynx's personality pretty good. Hope you update soon!

awesome so far i love it and im sure it will just get better. your a great writer and i love my character ^_^ shes perfect well i think so. and i love all the other characters to they seem awesome. and chris and chef were great too right on character. well its great so far and i cant wait for the next chapter and for the challenges to begin ^_^ this is gonna rock! oh and thank you for putting julie in

Oh, and you know how i told you Teary wasn't athletic, well... its true!
But he is pretty good, like if you ever read
Junie B. Jones Is Captain Feild Day
Crybaby William WON the feild days for room one by doing the most chin-ups!
So dont forget that...
WOT TEARY!

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PUTTING TEARY IN THERE! I MEAN, YOU WERE SO GOOD AT HIS PERSONALITY! WOOT! AND YOU EVEN PUT IN HOW SKINNY HE WAS! YOU ROCK! (Dont forget to mention how short he is..)(5 feet tall... hehehe.) ANYWAYS.. YA! YOU ARE SO SWET!
-By Nixfound, author of Ridy.
ANYWAYS, WOT!

this is great. thnx 4 picking my OC.
hope u update soon.

I can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon please!!

Sweet-ness! You added them! XD I was surprised they came in the same boat, I didn't mean for them to know each other before the show. Oh well, you still got there characters down nicely! Rosetta, PO'd at Riley, and Riley, enjoying every minute of it. ;)

Anyways, I love this! It's all very interesting, and you even give Chef a good amount of screen time. Your story is very funny and really exciting! Update soon!

Nice job thanks for adding my character! Update soon!