Great chappy! Are you happy yet? How about now? Now? I COMMAND YOU TO BE HAPPY!! (Ria gets crushed by closing screen)

AWSOME CHAPPY!! KEEP WRITING!! I'LL BE WAITING TO READ MORE!! =)

Ed REALLY likes food, doesn't he? HAHA! Dog fight.

Lucielle looks cute on the pic. Did you use paint? I can't draw very well on the computer. I have to do it with my hands. Great chapter and...NOT ANOTHER CLIFFIE! Every chapter is a cliffie to me.

I absolutely LOVE where this is going so far. Licielle seems awesome, nothing like a Mary Sue; more like a character that could really grow on me. Your writing style was easy to read and sort of quirky (in a good way) and the characterization was top notch! Update soon, I can't wait to read more.

Great! I can't wait for the next chapter!

GREAT!! Good job. Keep going with the story. CLIFFHANGER! Well it seems to be a cliffhanger to me. Update when you can.

this is a very cool story