Aww, this drabble is so cute. It's completely different from the ones I've read before.
You did pretty well..I really hope to read more in the near future.
Keep on writing, Sweetie!

OH I know this song...it's the one who's chorous goes:
"The closer you get, the better I feel
The closer you are
the more I see, why everyone says
That I look happier, when you're around
the closer you get, the better I feel"

I love Dido, and I Love that song, always related it to them too!
Nice job.