This is great, you should continue it or make it into a story.

Short, but sweet. I understand it's a contest thingy and they have word limits and all. Would have loved for it to be longer, but that's just because this story has captured me.

Oh this is good! I'm liking the way you have introduced Fluffy into the modern era and the last sentence of this is very...spine-tingling. Wonderfully written.