|Reviews for Jealousy|
| pkmn2112 6/14/12 . chapter 1
I like how you don't reveal whose story this is until the very last line. This is a really good piece. I mean there is not too much going on and it is really short and yet you have created a very solid story. I have to say you have a very advanced writing style. You write things in such a way that the entire seen your characters are in just comes to life! Great Job )
| Funky Bracelet Chick 6/19/11 . chapter 1
Okay. I admit it. You got me (or maybe I'm just an idiot). I totally thought this was from Ash's POV till the last word.
| ChikaMegumi 3/23/11 . chapter 1
I got confused who "he" was.. The first time I read it I thought it was Gary that had Misty until at the end I saw how it was Ash and Misty getting married.. Clever !
| burstbubbles 8/4/10 . chapter 1
i was so sad and scared at the beginning but at the end i was grinning from ear to ear. great work
| Crystalgurl101 6/30/10 . chapter 1
Awww! Poor widdle Gary! *snuggles* I cant help but want this guy-*cough*inmybed*cough-even more. xD Though, i loved the story! This is basically what jealousy is! Awesomeness!
| HMDangel 12/27/08 . chapter 1
HA! in your face Gary!
...sorry think i ruined the whole tone of the story there
great job though :)
| Rexa13 11/7/08 . chapter 1
Ash does get everything, poor Gary.
| BloodyLittleMinx 11/6/08 . chapter 1
This was nice. You completely nailed the jealousy here. Fantastic.
| Hymnophile 10/16/08 . chapter 1
This is like the "Gary MF'ing Oak" series.
You're at your wedding, you just married Misty, and guess who's next in the recieving line? Gary Oak.
| jai-kun 10/6/08 . chapter 1
You have re-defined my view of pokemon fanfics. They CAN (and I was worried about this for a long time) be very thought out, well written writings. Thank you, and I will be reading as much as you have written when I have time :D
| Super Reader 10/6/08 . chapter 1
Wow. At first I thought it was Ash. I don't know why. It never occurred to me that it could be Gary. *shrugs* Very very good oneshot. I love it. :)
| ELMO-kibafangirl11 10/6/08 . chapter 1
lots of meaning too
OMG IS THAT THE TIME?
I GOTTA GOTO SCHOOL!
| Final Genesis 10/5/08 . chapter 1
Hm, teehee! Nice that Gary held back his envy on an event like this!
This is Final Genesis, signing out!
| Cla.V 10/5/08 . chapter 1
Another great story ;)
| Milotic 10/5/08 . chapter 1
This is good work, as usual, although I have to admit that I was petrified when I saw the "Ash K and Gary O" at the top; I thought it was Ash and Gary who were getting married! I couldn't help but fear that you had suddenly converted to Palletshipping and that I wouldn't see another AAML story from you, so I'm very glad that isn't the case!
I feel like this is a good interpretation of the Ash and Gary rivalry. Even though Gary caught more Pokemon than Ash, Ash has always been the more successful trainer, something that I'd imagine would irk Gary to no end. I mean, Ash did better in the leagues and seems to be P. Oaks's favorite, so why wouldn't Gary be jealous? I admit that it's something I've never really thought about before, and now this fic has got me wondering about it. Good work.
By the way, I'm still on cloud nine because of The Text. :)