omg, Lt. John Hart! hahaha, so awesome that he's here. _

And yet Reinette is still a character that I'm not particularly fond of, hehehe, I don't think that will ever change.

I always thought it was weird that Rose never brought up Jack, and I really love that you had Rose as the one protecting Reinette as a child.

I have to say that I like your version better than the actual episode. I'm loving your series because I miss 9 and I think you've kept him in character through the episodes very well. I hope you continue your alternate versions.

beautiful story, especially this chapter!

Jenni

Wonderful idea, having him take the seven years route. So glad Rose defied his expectations-once again :)

Oh this was good! I, however, am quite bad, as my DAVIDTENNANTMUNCHAUSEN'SBYPROXY has rendered me so distracted as to leave me incapable of editing anyone's stuff but my own until it wears off, say, in, oh...904 1/3 years...

My, what an interesting predicament for Rose: sitting there with little Reinette while big Rienette is up to . . . who knows?

Can't wait to see the Doctor come to the rescue :)

Oh ho ho! Di ho ho ho!

Bloody splendid! Excellent job on the characterization!

Oh, I do like where you're going with this story. Let me guess... Reinette is WAY out of her time, and so that means that those who patrol and watch that sort of thing... besides the Doctor... are coming to fix it. Which, in turn, can only mean an encore appearance of everyone's favorite Time Agent, before he went Rogue. Maybe this is even a part of the two lost years? And Rose will be terribly excited to see him, but he won't know who she is. Orr... maybe the small cabin where the red light went off is somewhere in Cardiff in the future? Will this be the merge of Torchwood and "A Man Who Wasn't There?" I can't wait to find out!

I just LOVE the way you can stand an episode on its head like this, but still have it be completely believable and in-character :)

Thank you!

Ohh, that was pure Cor Blimey material, there. Brilliant!

Fun beginning!