god that was so freakin sad

Heartbreaking and yet so ** delicious. Amazing job.

PLease right more! i have to know what happens to edward when he finds out she's gone, and what she thinks about whenshe leaves. Please. this is really good!

make a sequal
make a sequal
please

of lord isn't this a charming story? normally i don't enjoy sad stories but this was pretty good i think u should continue it into a long story not just a one-shot

wow very nice!

If this was an AU story, I would give congrats on the angst and stuff. However, I did not see an AU tag and so I must point out ... vampires in Stephanie Meyer's world don't sleep. So, Bella slipping out while Edward was overcome with exhaustion after a tumble in the hay is quite OOC.

It was sad...but I loved it. You Have to make a sequel or something!

Wow, that was good. Are you considering turning it into a longer story?

u should continue this! it's really good!

aww that was so sad.
i like it tho it was super cool
angesty but very awesome
i never thot of this idea
or read another story like this
thats why i realy like it
very orginal
i bow down to you...hah

PEACE Delilah

Oh for gawd's sake! First, the angst! I loved the angst, it was beautiful, so lovely and holy crap, what the hell did Edward do to stand Bella up on their freaking wedding day? *sigh* But I really loved reading a story where Edward isn't the most perfect man alive, those stories far outweight these types. And second... a sequel? *lol* Please?! I love the angst, because it always leads to fabulous, happy endings! Well, most of the time, so... sequel? Other than that, excellent story, very nicely written for how short it was and you captured their desperation and pain very nicely.

Aw. That was so sad!! I was nearly crying at the end. The lemon was hot, but I was still nearly crying.