Totally enjoying this. It's great, full of suspense and really well written. You've completely captured my interest and I can't wait for an update :D

ONLY recommendation is to make sure you match action with the speaker.
"Monsters-?" Liz held up a hand. (Liz looks like the speaker)
"Mother Mary... possessed?" Liz nodded. (Again - looks like Liz
"If your well enough, the Professor would like me to take you to see him." October snorted sarcastically. (Sounds like October)

I know I saw some other examples in the earlier chapters but I wont pull them all up (unless you want). For the most part you get it fine but just thought I'd share that there were a few mistakes with that. (I'm really not trying to be picky. This is really good)

I'll be watching for an update.

Ah, cliffie. I can't wait for the next chapter! I really like this!

I like it so far! You write really well! Good job.

Whoa, that was just creepy. Write more, please. ^^

This is a good story. you have left me curious of what will happen next.