 Ruby 2009-11-29 . chapter 6 are there any other chapters? i would really like to read on, this is very gdd!(btw, i kno this isnt a review but i wanted to ask so..yeah) |
 AnnoyingLittlePixie 2009-10-28 . chapter 6 I love these stories! Please make more! I think Alice is the best character ever and I like the way half the characters are like, ready to kill her!
Please do lots more!
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AnnoyingLittlePixie |
 Maiiriana 2009-09-17 . chapter 6HEY!! alo alo! muy bueno!! cuando actualizn?? bno espero q pronto! ejemejem ... m vuelvo a disculpar x los reviews n espaƱol!! jaja bno muy bueno! continuen asi!!
ciao bss cdt! |
 louie-me-you 2009-09-13 . chapter 6omg lol please continue |
 Rebekah 2009-08-23 . chapter 6 this is a great book so far and when its done (if its as good as i think it'll be) it should really become an actual book. hopefully you can get the next chapter done soon.. until then.. i'll be waiting!! btw thanks so much for putting your book on here... its awesome |
 sierra1235 2009-08-16 . chapter 6luv it |
 littleredragtop 2009-07-28 . chapter 6I thought this story was great. I really liked the idea. Good Job! |
 brianna 2009-07-18 . chapter 6 i absoutly love thiss!!
please write moree verry soon. |
 AliceCullenFreaK 2009-07-12 . chapter 6sigh, Ali killed the mood. lolz. ^_^ I think thats good, don't want those two stuck in there room all the time do we. Edward's coming back! YAY! Do I get a cookie now?? |
 maxstew 2009-07-12 . chapter 6great story so far really like it update soon |
 lauren 2009-07-12 . chapter 5 this is really good i like it can u make more..asap |
 brittney 2009-07-05 . chapter 3 i love the fact that its in Rosealie and Ailce words. ailce is my FAVE... she reminds me so much like me...i think u should sell this i love love love love that its not i balla words (not saying i dont like it that way) but i never know what the family is thinking and now i do and its great!
TIPS:i think u should have Ailce tell the human side of her! |
 karina 2009-07-02 . chapter 3 this is awsome!!
you are a great writer.
so reading the next chapter! =] |
 charlie brown 2009-05-21 . chapter 3 i love this please keep writing i wanna read more you are a brill writer i cant wait for the next chapter |
 panda 2009-05-03 . chapter 2 this is great you should make like ten or twelve more chapters! |