Kill him dead? Isn't that a bit redundant?

LOVED the two-shot, though.

I agree not enough steamy max/terry fics...maybe there will be a 3rd one shot ; )

Hehe... more of these please...

Haha that was so funny! I bet Terry felt so wet! HA and Max probably felt it too.

Hehehe. Very cute! It would totally be tempting to try it on at least once... _

OMG! TOO TOO HOTT! STEAMY!

"It was like summer...in my room!"- Unknown

And Melissa is funny!

eek! so god!

i dont know why... but when i was reading this it was like i started writing the story in my head.. but different. i have a lot of good ideas i think but im just so busy/lazy that i never put stories up... :(

any ways. I thought he said to her in a low whisper: "So how does it feel?" and then she would get all shocked and she would be so BUSTED! lol

yeah no trying on the suit! and how did he know!

I thought he was gonna catch her, like in the act.

i must of been daydreaming...

anyways... i love your stories :)

That was only a tad adorable! Loved it.

I think I like Melissa. D

Haha, I couldn't help but laugh at the end. Terry and Max or so cute. D

Completely agree with you on this: we don't get enough steamy Ter/Max in fanfiction!

Thank you!

Heh, and it was amusing as hell to boot. Heh. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.

This is really cute, Kyo. I'm totally smiling like a fool right now. And using the word "totally". :)

Its clear that Max won that battle. But, Terry..whew! He can sleep in my bed anytime! Heheh! Great one-shot kinda/chapter! heheh! It was great!

I loved it! Terry and Max are so hot together, especially when they're not even trying.