Loved this one. You always have the right amount of humour to your stories, some of the dialogue had me laughing outloud! I love how you write Rodney and John, very realistic. The aftereffects were very well done, touchy without being mushy. Great story, thanks!

Great story. You had good characterization, made me panick when Rodney got impaled instead of John. You very funny jokes, I enjoyed it very much.

Have you ever written a John gets injured story? I've been trying to find a well written one, but I've not had any luck. Most people only injure Rodney.

~Twiny

Good story!!

That was cool! Lots of John/Rodney banter... lots and lots! Most of it was very funny too :) Excellent whump for Rodney too

Beautiful friendship story with a wonderfully scripted dance between these two characters! Loved the physical actions reflected in the verbal sparring. Great way to underline angst. Count me a FAN!

Excellent in all ways.

Excellent ansgty and frienship fic!

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

That was brilliant. You had their voices spot on all the way through and it was touching, exciting, nail biting, and laugh out loud funny at the same time.

Their banter was perfectly in character and really did have me giggling. It's one of my favourite bits about the show and was one of my favourite bits about this story.

Thanks for sharing :)

I read this straight through, loved every bit of it, but now I'm crying. I dunno. I'm just gonna miss SGA once this season ends. Viva la fan fiction, eh?

That was probably the best piece of SGA fic I've read in a long time. The characterizations were just wonderful. The dialog brilliant...my fav line was the 'I can multitask'. :)
As a writer I know how hard POV can be and you completely nailed Sheppard.
Fantastic job!! :)

Wow!! That was seriously 12 kinds of awesome. Had the perfect balance of snark and angst. You really have a knack for capturing these two characters and their deep friendship. Well done!

Loved it! The snark was perfect. I can so see them bickering as they try to escape--this is so classic Shep and McKay! So many great onliners, it's hard to pick a favorite. Shep-kabob--too funny.

Nice angst and loved their voices! The BC&tSK references were great. The story had great pacing too.

WOW, awesome talent you have going, there! I bow to your superiority in John/Rodney snark. It was so funny in places I was doing an unladylike snort, not recommended when drinking tea!

Having said that, next time make it Shep-whump (but Rodney-whump and Shep-angst is the next best thing).