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Tenderfoot
2009-04-30 . chapter 2
After reading “Feathers and Braids” I decided to check out some of your other stories in the hopes of finding another jewel. And Lo and behold! I did. :)

This story begins incredibly sweet and funny. I never though that Pietro and Ororo would fit so well together, then again I seem to remember that he had a thing for her in AOA. But like in “Feathers and Braids” you took to characters that usually don’t (or at least don’t often) interact in the comics, managed to keep them totally in character and then went beyond it and made me believe that this is how they would talk to each other.

You made me believe that they are friends.

I take of my proverbial hat to you. :) I really enjoyed reading this and hope that you’ll update this story soon.
Jade of Purple
2009-02-21 . chapter 2
I really like this story. I can't wait for the next update. :)
yaoilover0189
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
ilike the story except you made a mistake ororo eyes are blue not brown but other than that i love it
Mrs. Daysprings
2009-02-12 . chapter 2
Wonderful storey so far. I adore the Maximoff or rather the Lensherr twins. :) Not to mention everyone's favourite weather goddess. And I kind of like the friendship between her and Pietro from the first chapter alone. Pietro's remark about Jean-Paul made me snicker.

I'd love to read more. :D
ORIONSTORM04
2009-02-12 . chapter 2
Like I said before, nice update. Though i didn't notice a mistake that I put in there when I beta'd it for ya. The part that's supposed to be lack of a better word, well I put lakeck... yeah... you may want to change that. LOL sorry for the mistake, what kind of beta am I?! Next time, I'll be more thorough.
ORIONSTORM04
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
Dude, I like love this story! I read they one you're referring to in your author's notes like well over a year ago, and I always wanted to see where a Peitro Ororo story would go. I hope you continue with it, even if I have to stalk you to finish it. Update soon!
shejams
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
This is going on my story alert list.

I haven't read the X-Men comics in years, but from this first chapter I can see this is going to be interesting. Not only were 'Ro and Pietro were totally in character when \ you referred to the Quicksilver/Crystal/Luna family it brought back some memories of it.
I can't wait to see how you blend in the comic and movies 'verses together. Update soon
RogueOnFire
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
This looks promising and cute. As long as you specify time changes to the past and when, I don't care. I just like clear, well-written fics, and this is promising. However, I have a rule of not judging by first chapter alone. Please continue.

RogueOnFire
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