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This time I'm crying tears of joy! I'm so glad for Koby! And Cade along with the band! Of course Cloe will be discovered, duh, she's talented lol. :P

I was SO happy that Koby finally got emancipated and that he showed gratitude to not only Karleigh but Damien too. I loved the group hug! ^^ I knew that there was absolutely no way in hell Robert would get Koby, there was no way. I'm so happy that everything worked out for the best and damn, I LOVED this whole damn story. I can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve hon. I'm so excited. Thanks for the shout out girl! I love ya too! =D I'm just so anticipating the next story. I think you'll also like the next chapter of mine. If I can stay focused enough to write it ahah. Anyways, I loved it and I can't wait to read more from you!

I HATE Robert so much lol these will be interesting tid bits when I go to do a section on Robert and Margaret in Blast To The Past ahahah. >> I have so many ideas about them you don't even know... I'm actually thinking of doing them next in the story lol

Y'know, I knew that Robert would be a prick in this sense. Trying to take over doing everything and such. I'm so glad that Koby's seeking help from Karleigh.

I was very surprised to read about Koby going to Damien's house. Yet I was so glad because if Damien hadn't revealed to his students that his wife was a lawyer, where would Koby be now? Honestly, I don't think that Damien minded missing the lovemaking. He would just want Karleigh to help Koby to the absolute best of her abilities. If Karleigh told Koby that there was nothing more she could do, I think Damien would be more pissed off with her than Koby would be. The students don't realize how much of a passionate mad Damien is lol. ^^

Anyways, I'm glad that Koby's at least going to be safe for the night. I hope he texts Dylan and lets him know though, just so that he won't be worried all night. I can't help but to think Koby and Cade are gonna drink lol maybe do a substance? :P You never know...

Well, I really LOVED this chapter. So much so, I think it will help me the most with writing the story. I mean, I like to stay consistant with you because I know as a reader I hate going from story to story and seeing different names of parents and it just frustrates me lol. But yeah, I can't wait to read more girl! Keep doing what you do! ^^

Indeed the moment with Margaret and Koby was sweet, I'm glad that everyone was there for him. As someone personally having gone through a death it's very hard to do anything normally afterward. My characterization, well, I didn't just shut people out. I shut the world out. I didn't want to talk to anyone, do anything and etc. It's something Koby's never gonna get over. It's something that really sticks with you.

Wow, I'm so glad to read that Cloe basically gave up her big chance to Cade. That was so damn nice and considerate of her. Trust me, if Mr. Tucker's interested, he'll track Cloe down and sign her a record deal right away. ;)

Oh great, what's Robert gonna do now? He'd better not try and take over descion making or something like that because that would not be fair in the least, especially considering how much he respected Margaret anyway. Who knows though, perhaps we'll see a character development situation? Maybe, Robert won't know how much he's missed until it's gone from right out under his nose? Well, I know that I just can't wait for more! :)

That, was incredibly intense. I was sitting at my computer going "YES! Go Panthers!" Ahahah I loved the whole choir thing though, it was so inspirational and they sound like such an amazing choir. ^^ Cloe did an amazing job I'm sure. It sounded like it :P I also loved how Damien joked with Brayden about his "Love Handles" ahah too funny. I love how he gave Koby, Eitan, Dylan and Cloe props in class ahah too cute. Again, you descriptiveness just nailed the story, it was amazing girl, it really was.

I really hope that Koby doesn't get there too late. Hopefully his mom will be able to tell him she loves him one last time. :/ Ah, so sad. Not to mention all of Margaret's friends seeing her slowly die. Wow, this is something else. But that's good. I know that Cloe will be upset about them not popping in to see her after the game but once she learns the reason why, she'll understand. I'm sure Cloe will be devistated too. I can't wait to see how this unfolds now. I'll be here patiently waiting for another update but I honestly can't wait. ^^

Ah, the little get together was a nice idea for sure. Poor Koby though, and poor Margaret. Man, I hope she lives until Friday, but somehow I'm thinking that's part of the drama... dum dum dum! lol

I'm sure Margaret's gonna get a few more visitors, surely, I mean, what about Claire and Cloe? Hm, well, I don't even know what to say. I'm also glad that Margaret wants to catch the game and Cloe's concert on TV... I love the room she's in and that she's very happy to be there during her last days, but I know Koby just wants to wake up from this nightmare and he wants to see her at home, healthy again. :/ It's such a sad, sad thing that you can write about but make it come to life in writing. Man, you're so talented ^^ I wish I had half the talent you do... :)

Aw, telling his friends could definitely not be easy on him. I mean, you're right, all they can say is sorry and send their condolences. It doesn't help with the pain, it doesn't help with the emotional trama Koby's going through, there'll be more trama emotionally when she's gone... I can't help but to think what will happen, will Margaret pass away in her son's arms? Giving a simple hug? *tears* Ah... well, you know that I absolutely loved it and I can't wait for more. ^^

Omg... I don't know whether I'm in shock, denial or ready to cry. In a way, I actually expected this but my god, it can't be easy. I feel so horrible for Koby and especially Margaret. I'm just glad that she had gotten to say what she wanted to him before she died though. I wonder what else is going to happen though, I mean, where's Koby going to live? How's he going to break it to his friends? I can't wait for these answers lol. :'(

Brayden, ah, imagine growing up with someone only to have them go before you. He's gonna miss her terribly, so will Miranda, so will Claire, Amy, Andrea, Felicia they've all grown up around her. I wouldn't be surprised to see Damien come to her funeral because he too was a dear friend of hers. They were in the closet together at one point lol. ^^

That's so like Margaret, it's true though, what's the point of spending your darkest hours in sadness? Why not be happy and try to add some humor to it? One thing I do hope, is that Koby listens to Margaret and does what he wants her to with school, being there for Cloe and such. Y'know, I haven't cried in a long time but I can hardly see the review I'm typing lol. Ah, I love you lol you can make me cry with words. Well, I loved this whole story and I can't wait for you to wrap this story up. Not that I want to see it done, I think you pretty much got what I meant lol. I can't wait for more girl. =)

I knew Koby would figure out something. He's quick and smart like that. ^^ Now if only I was lol.

I can't wait to read this whole concert thing, sorry Koby but I'm just not into soccer that much aha. :P

It's nice to read about Koby keeping up his school efforts. Good for him. I still feel sorry for Jade tho, poor girl. :(

Anyways, I also loved how Margaret scared Koby lol. Too cute! I also love to her see her and Koby in high spirits. Hopefully she got some grocery shopping done though. :P I can't help but to feel it won't last long though. Well, I can't wait to read more from you! ^^

^^ It's great that she's come along so weel! Unfortunately, that doesn't mean to say that it couldn't happen again though.

I love Koby's dedication and admiration for his mother, Margaret is one strong woman and I'm sure she won't go down without a fight at least.

I also love (then again, what don't I love about your chapters?) the card that everyone signed for her. So sweet! Plus it lets everyone know to let up on Koby. Hopefully that coach will be a little lighter on him too. I loved it gurl and I can't wait for more. ^^

AW...POOR MARGRET *SNIFFLE SNIFFLE* OMG! and jade and koby as well.hm drama. Well chapter/story hon I love this specific story alot at the moment...and se I told you I would make up my non r&r's to ya hon lol.

Yeah, leave it up to Brayden to take his own time to help them. It's so sad seeing Margaret like that. Hopefully Brayden will find Koby and Jade, waking them up in time to get to school. :/

Well, I don't know how many more of these colds or infections Margaret can fight off. It really takes a toll, especially with the blood cells being zapped out of her system. It's so sad... something just tells me praying isn't exactly going to heal everything, but it might help for the time being.

Ah, well that was an amazing chapter and I can't wait for more! ^^

I love Koby and Jade's spontaneousness, aha right in the soccer feild. What a better place though?

I hate how false accusations get around peers so fast it makes your head spin. Still, it's a good thing that Cloe showed up to confrim it. I also love Cloe's bluntness too. ahah. ^^ You tell 'em girlfriend! :P I'm glad all issues are resolved. Phew lol.

Hmm, so much suspense when it comes to Maragaret... y'know, I've been expecting this for a long time actually, her to be rushed to the hospital like that. Poor Koby, just when he's been starting to get his life back on track dealing with his mother's illness. Poor thing... well I'll just be sitting here. . . waiting . . . for the next completely amazing chapter! @_@

First of all, I loved the whole sex tape thing ahaha how Jade was open to a lot of things but not those. Too funny.

I'm glad that Cloe and Koby both had their fun with alcohol... it's a pretty good stress reliever lol. I should know. But at the same time, when Jade came into that... scene I slapped my forehead. I tend to do that a lot ahaha my mom says that's how I get my brain damage lol :P Anyways, I knew that she had it all wrong. I figured that would happen too. Only, I don't know if Jade should have flown off the handle like that. Only, who am I to judge? Especially since I don't have a boyfriend and I wouldn't know. Still, the poor guy needs a chance to get his word in. If Jade only knew that Cloe was on the verge of actually committing suicide and that Koby talked her out of it... well, I think her view would change dramatically. For some reason though, I don't think things will work out that easily lol.

Well hon I absolutely LOVED it! Ahaha I'm an adoring fan of yours lol. I can't wait to read more. Don't you ever stop writing... ^^

Snap, that was an excellent chapter blondie! I'm so amazed at what an author you are. Wow...

Y'know, honestly, that would be exactly how I would kill myself. Pills and alcohol. At least I'd die happy lol. Anyways, I found it so amazingly heartfelt when Cloe came through to Koby. I'm really glad that he was able to help her see what an awesome person she really is. At least Koby got his rant in about his father's family. I wonder if he's going to tell Jade detail for detail too. :/

I LOVED the shopping chapter. My mouth dropped at the price of the video camera but I was so glad the guy dropped the price for her. Perhaps Cloe could get Jade a perfume that she knows Koby is nuts about and vice versa, Cloe giving Koby a cologne that she knows Jade will die for lol. How sweet would that be? aha.

As with Koby, I thought it was very cute how he recuited Cloe in on that. Y'know, her telling of the Kay Jewelers didn't really surprise me lol. Cloe would want Koby to buy the best for Jade, especially after seeing what Jade got Koby lol. Ahh that's the best part of having inner friends lol.

It that really how Black Friday goes? Retailers just drop prices like that? Snap lol I need to shop there for Christmas lol.

Anyways, this was an absolutely amazing chapter and I can't wait for more! (I was long indeed lol) ^^

I thought that Cloe would be the first person he would call lol. But Jade was a good choice ^^

Isn't Black Friday like Boxing Day? I have no idea lol I'm Canadian eh? ahaha

Anyways, Margaret and Koby have a relationship like my mother and I. We can be so totally open and honest about everything. It's wonderful. Anyways hon, I loved the chapter and I definitely cannot wait for more :D