lol love this one! i keep reading that 2nd to last paragraph...LOL!!

Have I ever told you how much I LOVE your writing style? If I haven't, then I need to now. I love it and I'm just saying that either. It's funny, new and refreshing and I think you've got a real talent at this.

What I really love most about your story is how you always stay true to every character's personality no matter how morbid or frustrating it may actually be which never ceases to amaze me. That's what I've always adored about your stories: the honesty. I admit that at times the tones of your stories affect how we feel towards a certain character but it's the quality of said writing that always makes your real fans stick around for more.

I didn't quite understand the point you were trying to come across with in this one, but I still enjoyed it either way. Dib was just freaking hilarious! And the line, "Whatever was stuck up Gaz's **, it was big, it was stuck and it did not want to come out." really made me laugh!

This is the best Invader ZIM fanfic that I've read in awhile. Keep up the awesome work! You have definitely earned yourself a cookie for this one! -smiles and hands you a cookie-

~Sincerely, Jellymaster!

A little short, but gets to the point quickly.

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I don’t remember which episode this scene is from and can’t be bothered to look through my DVDs to find out, but I like how you tweaked it to make Dib stand up for himself more.

This line made me LOL: “‘You're... TALKING!’ Gaz hissed, horrified to the core that somebody dared to be, well, talking.”

Firstly, I must say that I want what Dib's reading, although I question its validity somewhat. I mean, EVERYONE knows that there's no way to assure quality EVPs!

I really liked Dib here. "Oh, come on! Bigfoot would NEVER say that!" That line had me giggling. It was just very in character. (It also got me thinking about the GHOST of Bigfoot my friend and I were talking about in psych. Inevitably Dib was brought into the conversation.)

Gaz is, of course, just full of hot air.

Hey that was really good! You got Dib and Gaz really well! I always liked to think Gaz's threats were hollow. She's never actaully done anything to anyone. Except Iggins...

Well, both siblings come off a little jerkish, but I think that's what you were going for. :-) So pretty cool.