Good chapter, Ikatsui is fighting just like it shoud be, and it seems to me like Ikatsui isnt even trying. Which is good, well this chapter is a gret way to start things off for a fighting chapter, but its a bit shorter then expected. But i know that you will have bigger chapters for the fights. Just one question. IS one chapter going to be all about one foght, as the next would be the same? Or is it, you tell both fights during each chapter?

Yay!! New chappie!

Poor Inbi got cut up and Chikai got stabbed...

MEH.

You almost killed my character. Then you made her come back and she was EVIL.

I am sad. She was intended to be a happy, cheerful character. Thanks for making her so... so... stupid and bitchy!!

good chapter i must admit, wish Ikatsui was in it. Well al i ask is thata the fight be a good one and one question pops to my mind. What does Arai do with no bankai, or is that in the next chapter. Either way it starting to look like a promising ending. Hope your having fun with this, it not going to last long as you said. Well good job and keep up good writing, you shall one day peek my interest, at the rate your going

*eats L cake*

Yayy! Chikai has a cool bankai! *stares at pretty butterflies*

Yay!

wow. Awesome! I should probably be drawing them shouldn't I? lol SURPRISE ROMANCE! Poor Chikai, that was what now...3 chapters of angst in a row. :D What happens next?!

ZOMFG! RANGST!!

Haha, I liked it. But it was a little tiny bit hard to follow.

well now this really is getting interesting, and Ikatsui is so much like Gin or even better. This kind of reminds me of this one time were i was at martial arts class, was punched, hesitated, and got hit in the face. But i was fine but the attacker had his knuckles bleeding(thaks to braces), a lot got on me, and half of it was on my clothes, ut the other half somehow ended up in my mouth. and surprisingly it was interesting to me. it had less iron then my blood, and seemed more healthy. but also seemed to be more like water,and the taste was totally different from my own. but anyways back to review. I think this chapter really gave off the power of Ikatsui, and not to judge but, a if Inbi was trapped then it wouldnt be a Kido it would be a Binding spell. and speaking of which did you make the kido up, or found it on the internet? well all i have to say is keep writing and give responses after you read this.

Yayy! Poor poor Hito. What is Inbi's bankai going to be? *dance* The neck snapping really was the best scene in twilight. :D KER-SNAP! g2g, kittens are crying very loud.

Yay, violence!

Ikatsui's really creepy. JSYK.

well i think i will review this way

6 out of 10

this chapter was good buty short but thats ok. i must say that things are really looking tense (SEXUAL TENSION)
well ikatsui really looking like a evil person, and really has the personality of Gin. i LIKE IT! well Arai seems to have a crush which is what was predicted, well have fun writing LordXwee, keep writing till its over and i share story

the next chapter you write he next three people i get to read this FanFiction Doc.

AWESHOME.

EVeryone's ooc except Inbi i think. HEE HEE HEE. :D

Whe! Imma zonbi! I'll post pics of Chikai and Gilly's oc eventually.

well the pairing of OC's is beginning, and enemies are being made. was the scientist killer who i think it is? (Rotasu-sama). well now this chapter in like, but there wasnt much emo as it was just pity. just you wanted to fell bad but you dont. well its good, and now i want to know whats with Ikatsui and Arai

i see a pairing, well is Inbi going to be a naughty boy?
i am reading one manga, i am at the pillar fights the third one. with a zanpak-to thats JUST LIKE MINE ITS VERY SCARY

anyway, when do u want emo flash back turned in?

good though liked this chapter, no left for suspense or anything just how i like it