Very beautiful, put it to favorites!

Sad, a bit depressing but yet, strong and with a shade of hope at the end!

*sob sob*

It's so sad!

::cries softly:: how sad!

GREAT STORY! It is so sad she had to go through somthin like that...and i think it is kinda good that you put there name diferent...Lita would not use the same last name you know...i would think she would have someone tryin to find her and get her to an orfinage (cant spell)...so i think is was very good...*clap**clap**clap*

Oh my god, I love your fic! It's really good... I love fics that just make you choke up like that... I also am a BIG Makoto fan! Again, great fic!

soo so sad :*( poor lita

I think you have a great story here. you made it so sad !*sniff* I better *sniff* go now ...

This was really good. Wrong last name but who cares about that. It was good anyway. I liked it a lot.

awsome

I was reading the reviews you got and I think some people are a little mean here. I mean who cares about grammar in my eyes the plot and the lesson behind a story are what count. You have a good story and dont let anybody tell you otherwise. Hey I am really bad at grammar but that doesnt stop me. As for having the wrong name who cares. Its your story and make it how you want. By the way I thought it was great keep up the good work

This just left me flat. And Lita's family name in Kino. Khan is the badguy from "Star Trek 2" and the annoying guy on "King of the Hill."

Hey, that was good...I liked it.I didn't know Lita's parents died! :( HOW sad!

Well, a lot of grammar mistakes in this one...