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Sharidaken Tranqity
2008-10-20 . chapter 2
Great chapter sis, as always XD I have my moments when it comes to thinking I wrote either good or bad chapters of my stories but that's alright.

Anyway, it was nice meeting your characters in this chapter and great to see ChibiSkitty in this, the queen of comedy XD. And great that you mentioned Ranger & I as well, at least you know I'm one to guard your back and make sure no one messes with ya.

But you have a point that I'm usually busy when it comes to helping out other cartoons and anime characters, living with my own OC's, making sure Moe stays out of trouble, and being pulled by fan girls. The only time I don't have to do all that is when ever were under attack.

Anyway, great chapter, can't wait to use your OC's in my one shot which my other stories will be on hold until its finished. I just gotta get the story up before friday.
Seth Nemah
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
Hey Asia not bad this is starting to get good, keep it up.
ChibiSkitty-donna
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
I feel honored that you put me in, even if I didn't ask. And Rei bashed Heather from TDI? XD Oh man, I can imagine Bena also doing something crazt bashing Heather, bashing her over the head with Xibchi's black staff. LOL
Ranger24
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
Well you ever need help give me a call...
Ranger24
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Don't worry asia! RANGER TO THE RESUCE! I bashed that pairing anyways
ChibiSkitty-donna
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
whoa...I don't want to see that happening to you. You're to young to die!
Sharidaken Tranqity
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Hey sis, great story. It's alright if you wanna work on a new story featuring your new OC's as body guards. I wouldn't think that's bad. Besides your just stating your point of view and if anyone ** about this story I'll snap their necks. And don't about fans who are offended by this because I think its about time they see the reason why this is not a good couple. Compaired to you guys and my actually friends who seem to care, they must not have much of a brain to think that's a couple and most other couples that do or don't make sense aren't that great. So keep up the good work. ;)
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