I like this story. It opens up so many new possibilities! I eagerly await the next chapter.

Wow, I wasn't expecting an update THIS fast! You're good.

Aw, I love scenes between Kratos and Anna. It amuses me how their very first conversation after years and years of separation consists of Anna yelling at him. And, wow, I honestly didn't even consider that Maritka might have been Kratos' daughter. I can't wait to see how Lloyd handles his new siblings.

Just one thing bugs me, how could Lloyd recognize Anna as his mother but not Kratos as his father? He lost them both simultaneously, and the game implies that he was as close to his father as he was to his mother when he was a kid. Come to think about it, if I met someone I hadn't seen in 14 years, I doubt I'd recognize them at all, let alone if I had been a toddler at the time.

Good job with this chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one when it's done. (Maybe I'll be lucky enough to get another update after I submit this review...? You know what, take your time and make it perfect, good Kranna is hard to find.)

Aw crap, you've found my secret weakness. Kranna. CURSE YOU! *shakes fist*

It kind of confuses me how that man remembered that 10 years ago, someone got moved and was never heard from again. I'm going to assume that it's not unusual for Desians to kill prisoners that have been misbehaving, so someone disappearing and never being heard from again sounds like a common occurrence. And after 10 years, I'd just assume they were long dead.

I was also kind of surprised that Raine told Anna that she was a half-elf right away, considering that she had been the the custody of the Desians and Raine didn't know whether the prisoner she was rescuing had developed some prejudices against their race over such a span. And then there are the kids, which I'm going to say are either not hers or products of rape. If Anna had been raped or similarly abused by Desians (which I'm sure Raine would assume as well), I don't think Raine would have taken the risk of having Anna refuse to come with her just because she didn't trust her.

I'm wondering whether Kratos knows that Anna is alive and how Dirk got a hold of Lloyd years ago if Anna lived, but I'm sure these will be addressed in future chapters. So please update soon, I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here. (And some Kranna. You have to update soon so I can get my Kranna fix.)

Anna is alive! (:
how will Kratos react? Lloyd?
im more interested in Kratos (: 'cus he's the one who will reconize her quickly.
and Raine? i mean.. she's smart, and the Aurion is a quick giveaway
please update soon (:

...Cliffy. Cliffhanger. But...yay, Anna's alive! Woot! I wanna join the Anna fanclub!

Kranna forever!

Okay, okay, okay. I know it took me FOREVER to review. But I finally have. Yay! So...you DO know that letting me into a fan chapter means insanity, right? Of course you do. You read Freaky's story. So...where to begin...*evil grin* I want to tackle glomp Zelos and/or Yuan if it's possible to bring him in, drop kick Sheena (I have to do that in everything I'm in...I have nothing against her, it's just my signature...), find a magic book that gives me angel wings and then fly around poking everyone (That is the most important part! It took me forever to think of something fun to do.), fly away and come back with Yuan's capey (capey capey capey...), and, of course, worship the great and all powerful Fred, as we already discussed. xD If that's too much, you can take out anything except the wings and the glomp. Those are important...very important. (In case you can't tell...I'm pretty hyper right now. It's almost 1:00 in the morning...bad time for me to review...but always fun...)

Huzzah, the tale is underway! Long live Anna Aurion, and Martel save the Chosen! ^_^ (Why yes, I'm in a very renfest-y mood today, why do you ask?)

And I may be painfully out of the loop here, but just what is a fan chapter? I have an idea, but I could always be wrong...

That was great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I wanna see Raine's reaction XD

Hm...I am one of the first to do fan chapters, aren't I? (Blink) And who're the kids? I suppose the girl could be hers, but there's no way that baby can be hers. Unless...y'know, the desians...did stuff to her.

I WANNA JOIN THE ANNA FANCLUB! n.n Can I come in with Fred, shake Anna's hand, push her into Kratos, make Lloyd hug her, and then rant about how Fred will take over the world? n.n lol.

Your writing style is very attractive, by the way. Short and to the point, yet enough on description to make it intersting. n.n Good job.

I'm looking forward to Kratos' reaction when he sees Anna. :D And Lloyd's, of course, but Kratos is the one who will actually recognize Anna very quickly. Hehe.

This is a very interesting idea. I don't see how it can be possible, but I guess that'll be explained later. So update soon!

I must admit, you have my interest.

From what I see, a very nice chapter. Very few errors, if there are any at all. Although I would suggest you put your A/N's in bold or something. Or maybe add a block to seperate them.

Still, what on earth are Lloyd and Kratos going to say? To think? Oh happy days? XD And does Lloyd have siblings? And you mentioned Alicia being with Regal; does this mean she'll be alive as well? I guess we'll find out later on.

(Hmm...a fan club, eh? I'd like to join if possible.)

A very good start, and very interesting idea; again you have my interest! I'll keep this alerted. Update whenever you can! ^__^

Woots! n.n
Fics with Anna in them are fun,
It seems interesting so keep it up.
(I wanna join the anna fan club n.n)

I was beaten to be the first reviewer. Humph. Oh well, it's not like I can blame my volunteering for that, the kids are adorable. I'll take second review.

Anyways...you finally posted it! Yay! This is awesome, I do love this idea. It's something no one's ever thought of, so it has potential for awesomeness. Good job!

An Anna fanclub? This you did not tell me. *raises hand* I will join, I want to join.

There was a few teeny critical things in the chapter I'll point out to you later (don't worry, they're fairly minor).

Keep it up, girl.

Eek! Anna! (they should really add her in the character list...) *cough cough* well, just remember that Anna's grave can't be at Dirk's house. No body to bury. ^^; love how it's late into the game! =D