very nice and refreshingly original. most Earthian fics seem to be about the same things over and over ( not that most of us mind)

I hope you continue, this fic caught my attention and I'd like to find out what happens next.

You know... I think... I think I've finally been inspired again. Thank you. *nods to self* Your fics usually do that for me. *walks off to plot something strange. as usual*

PLEASE PLEASE Write more on this.. ONEGAI!

KAGETSUYA! BAD GIRL! Dammit! I sneak onto the computer to find that you have written another (of course) beautiful piece of fanfiction. HOWEVER! You only have ONE chapter? Beat me with a rusty spork, why don't you? *coughs and gets herself relatively under control* Come on, Kage-chan... you can't leave me hanging. Next time I sneak on here, I want to see MORE of this. Pleaaaaaaaaase?

Ooooooh I like this.. write more to this! _v

You tease! *pout* Leaving so many loyal fans, myself included, hanging in midair like that. Please, do continue! You definitely have something good going here, and besides, it'll give me yet ANOTHER fic to add to my favorites list... Provided it ever works again. *sweatdrop; goes back to dreaming up nice Michael/Raphael images*

Yes continue! You're just teasing us with this little snippet! grrrr...