Oh snap. Leblanc is SO dead. Her ass can be considered to be on her "to kick" list. Also, what a bitch. I mean, really. If someone helped me as much as Rayne helped Leblanc, I wouldn't steal stuff from them.

Great chapter, you really captured the Leblanc Syndicate very well and you showed a possiblity on how they started out. I am wondering though is what Rayne's Garment Grid dresspheres will be and what her special dressphere is. And I hope Boky makes another appearance, and I know he will.

Your Faithful Reader and Friend,

Jon

Wow. That is a very powerful beginning. OH, and what the hell is wrong with you? Are you evil? Really really evil? Is that it? 'Cause why else would you have Rayne leave Michael behind? Especially because he reminds her of Auron. Wouldn't she want that kind of reminder? To show her what is waiting for her on the other side?

First, I have to say your welcome though I don't think I did much I appreciate the thanks. Second, Yay Boky's back. Thrid, I'm waiting to see where this story is going to go because I know that the Bahamut didn't bring her back so that she could hide from her friends and allies forever. Bahamut wants her for something relevant to the main story. The question is what?

Your Faithful Reader and Friend,

Jon

Yes, another story xD

And Boky is back )

But Micheael is left behind :'-(

Go on xD