Awe, I just loved this story so much!=) Usually I don't like it when it begins with the characters already as a couple but with your story, it was so cute! What I really loved about it, was that I could actually picture them doing those things! So adorable!! xox=Love!

the japanese place ya speek of is called Nagoya with o.
But all in all very good ^^

*drools* LOVE YOU!! WRITE MORE!! :D

i thought this was really great :D
i love Sena and Hiruma!!
Awesome job this was really sweet especially towards the end :D
Great job!! XD

XD "That was good I needed more Hiru/Sena smex. Thank you! And Eww, the smell of pumpken pie truns guys on? Yuck that stuff smells nasty, but it dose tase good, If you drownd it in wip cream."

Rofl Nice~ XD~ Write another fic. soon, Sisco-sama :P

I'm gonna die laughing!! *falls over, gasping for breath*
Ok, I'm better now. *takes slow even breaths* I love how you showed Hiruma's perverted side. There is no way anyone could be as cunning and demonic as him, and not be a total perv!
I like the way Hiruma drives, reminds me of my brother, though I doubt Hiruma would really swerve to save a doggie.

Hm, parts were funny and parts were weird (like that icky icky pumpkin lube. I like the smell of pumpkins but it's sort of too strong...)

Does this festival really exist and is it the way you described it? The story is fine even if you made it up... but that just seems really weird x.X