 EmmettMcFly55 2008-11-01 . chapter 2This is going to be very, very hard for me. Now that you've uploaded a new chapter, I'm anxious to read the next one. This chapter is even better than the first one. Doc really is confused about the whole thing. I guess that even 1976 Doc wouldn't be as thinking fourth-dimensionally as his 1985 counterpart. Anyway, I guess that Calvin is from LP/Clayton/A, while Marty, Jennifer, Doc and Sarah are from the sixth timeline - the one in which Biff did get the book but lost it.
It's going to be hard for Chris and Jessica to have to explain everything so many times. I know that in Kristen Sheley's 'No Place Like Home' Marty got tired of Doc telling the whole tale all over and over again - and it got longer every new dimension they visited.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to chapter 3, even if that won't come for a few weeks, or even months. Well, I guess I have to do with your other story, now - the one that's for NaNoWriMo. I am sure that you're going to make a good story out of that, as well.
Well, I uploaded the first chapter of my story - so maybe you could review me, too? That would be really nice! |
 EmmettMcFly55 2008-10-07 . chapter 1You posted Dazed of My Youth, and the first chapter is already looking awesome. I can't wait until the next chapters come up. One thing that I did notice, is that everyone does still remember each other, as they do in 1986. I guess that's why Calvin became unconscious - he was changing to be an eight-year-old from the inside. Heavy.
Can't wait until you continue! |