i love how the different remixes of the story go into a different detail about what happened. The descriptive words are great.

I first visited this fic late at night, and just found myself frowning at the screen. It was really interestingly written though, so I'm back, and fully awake this time!

I cannot believe you can write like that. It's so fractured yet it flows perfectly. It's dark and gritty and all kinds of wrong but sprinkled with black comedy (and Mello getting his sex on!), saving it from being morbid and depressing like a lot of other 'dark' fics. I'm still here at the end, not contemplating suicide! Huzzah!

Your OC is a very interesting man indeed. I'm kind of curious about his past... I say 'kind of' because I get the distinct feeling that he has the kind of skeletons in his closet that would give most people nightmares! *shudder* He has an air about him that says 'I moved out of Sin City because it was too damned tame.' Pretty creepy, but funny with it. OMG - an OC with a personality!

I am totally impressed by the way the plot turns out too. For a while, I thought it was just going to be a story about some random stuff Mello did in the time between leaving Wammy's and turning up in the US, but tying it in with his relationship with the mafia was just brilliant.

Finally, the remixes were just... weird! I never knew that boots were whores - I shall have to keep my eye on those Dr. Martens... Are you SURE you didn't tamper with these lines? XD

One of the most mind-boggling things I have ever read. Favouriting for posterity... and Mello performing a strip-tease.

Woah, this is so very different from what I usually read! The style was interesting and poetic; I'm certainly glad I clicked on this!

I love the Sex Remix by the way XD