This is a classic Supernatural story. Well thought out, well executed. This would definetly fit in to any season for the show. Your characters are true to canon and behaved exaclty how they should have in the situation you put them in. And lots of Bobby scores you many points too. Well done.

Yup, everything was too rosy. Aggh! How could you do this to me?? I've never come so close to crying over ANY fic, let alone one of yours. Dean's monologue was simply brilliant. Omg, it was hard to read - I wanted to climb into the story and hug him to pieces! *sniffle*

And Sam, hearing every word - it's good that he did, but...*more sniffles* Dean is so hard on himself. Again, it was difficult to read, but his self-esteem was definitely at its lowest. Poor guy! *even more sniffles, last ones, I promise!*

You're a master of both extremes: side-splitting humour, and intense poignancy. Once again, you've honoured us with exceptional writing and storytelling - and it didn't cost us a dime! Thank-you for another thrill-ride into your glorious imagination!! *standing ovation*

'til next time! :)

Omigosh, Dean in the raw underneath! Yes! Ha,ha, what a great chapter! The exploding werewolf was hilarious - kinda felt sorry for it, but not that much. You come up with some of the most interesting tidbits of information! LOVED the kidding between Sam and Dean - well, I guess Dean wasn't kidding about the gun insertion. Funny!!

Hmm, what is it that Dean isn't telling Sam about his detachment from the baby? Can't wait to find out! Awesome writing!

Great job with Dean's turmoil at the deal. You portrayed his apprehension as well as his conviction beautifully. I liked that they needed to save the baby, a good twist to a monster hunt. Well done!

Sue

Great story! Loved the last chapter! Loved the speech from Dean, and the parting conversation between Mar and him.

Whew! Lots of action! Wow, excellent chapter. When the baby belched, I just laughed. Sam and Martia clinging to each other in fear of the great baby burp - too funny!

The snatch and run from the hospital was pretty spectacular, esp. for Sam. Bobby is so sympathetic, ha,ha! Dean on the spot is a funny thing indeed!

The showdown is coming...can't wait to see what happens next! Should I look forward to a happy ending??

:)

Nasty cliffie, lol! Loved Dean and Bobby together, the smart-ass and the grump play so well off each other! Dean must be freaking out, though...I hope Sam is wrong.

So if I trust you does that mean the baby won't turn?
Think I'll check it out myself anyway in the next chapter you so graciously provided. ;)

Great update! :)

Great story! Can't wait for more!

Lol! I love the, "Bobby could eat flour and shit cupcakes." Hilarious! Where did you get that? *leaves to keep reading*

Oh, I can't wait for midweek! This is a fascinating story! Is the baby really transforming? I hope for Dean's sake that she isn't, or he's in a tad of trouble. Of course, he's in trouble with Sam at the moment, but at least Martia was helpful.

Why was a man attacked who looked just like Dean? Expecting some answers next chapter, lol

You're spoiling me with the double helpings, but thanks!!

:)

Omigosh, all those adorable little things babies do, and their little squeals and giggles! Brings back fond memories! Love the Sam angst, he sees everything that he could have had in that little girl. He would make a great father. I'm betting Dean will miss her too, in his own way.

Loved this chapter, looking forward to next!
Excellent writing!

:)

Uh, oh! Methinks Sam has put two and two together and come up with three: Mommy, Daddy AND Baby Werewolf. And Mommy and Daddy won't ever be claiming their baby. This is getting very interesting!

Poor Sam, he seems really hurt that the baby is taking to Dean and not him.

I really hope Dean doesn't suffer any dire consequences from the scratch, but then he IS Dean...

Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the weekend! :)

That is AWESOME! And so cute!! Dean and kids -- what more can I say!
Great.
Keep up the great work and update soon!!

I love it!! Omigosh, Sam and Dean being stuck with a baby - priceless! Dean's reaction is exactly what I'd expect from him! Poor guy, after battling nearly every known monster under the sun, he's brought down by a little bundle of 'smell and noise', ha,ha!

Hm...Sam seems to be taking to "foster fathering" like a duck to water. Interesting! I wonder what got him so upset??

Very funny stuff, as always!

Next chapter awaits! :)

interesting story, love the bit of a cliffhanger, leaves me wanting to read more!