so far i like the direction you are going. your writing itself is also very good, and i hope to read more in the near future.

wow this is great stuff! you are a very good writer, i love how you write how they are feeling and the news was scary. pleaseee carry on writing :)

love it! Great! :D

Please continue!

I loved it! I think Oliver is just adorable. Please write more soon, but take your time. :D

I really wish you would've kept writing, lmao. I just noticed that this story was published in '08. Think about writing more..please? :D

Wow! This is really, really awesome.

I am very interested to see where this is going. I loved this movie, and it's awesome to see a well written fic about it. Please update soon :)

loved this. you wrote about their feelings really well

Frankie xx

A great story. Very good.

Rather excellent. I have been in a zombieish mood lately because I've been watching the new Left 4 Dead gameplay videos. haha.

i really like this and cant wait to hear more

hopefully some action and horror soon?