 KylaRyan 2009-08-13 . chapter 12I love what you have going here. I might have a bit more familiarity with amnesia, as I have studied it in my psychology classes, but I do have to say that you are doing an excellent job of protraying retrograde amnesia.
I hope to hear more soon,
KR |
 Ennairam Atrum Austerus 2009-07-06 . chapter 12 Pray do continue this story, it's so good ^^
Holmes without a memory and being clueless for once in his lifetime is so adorable cute :D |
 Protector Of The Nameless 2009-04-08 . chapter 12This was a very good story! I hope Holmes can get his memory back. Please update soon! |
 Skeeziks 2009-02-19 . chapter 12"But obviously even his very instincts told him that a young woman inside his bedroom was a rather uncommon sight, to put it mildly."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Great line!
Really enjoying this! |
 Westron Wynde 2009-02-19 . chapter 12 "I could not help but smile: I had just witnessed a woman (sic!) handling both of the Holmes brothers almost at once" - yes, that's certain a momentous happening - and that line made me smile too!
And for this reason alone - "Never before, when it came to my stories, had my friend proven such an attentive listener" - Holmes should lose his memory more often ;)
Great chapter :) |
 reflekshun 2009-02-18 . chapter 12This story has me on the edge of my seat,there is so much to think about. Please
write more soon. And, as always, thank you for sharing. |
 FoggyKnight 2009-02-18 . chapter 12Yay, you have updated! Now if only I could get the same motivation ;).
Watson's right, Holmes will never have cause to complain after this. |
 Wirral Bagpuss 2009-02-18 . chapter 12Hey i am so glad you have continued with this story. Now my only dilema is deciding whether Holmes is revoering but does not let on becaue he would place Watsin danger or if he is still without his memory ! Hm the plot thickens and i cant wait to read more ! :D |
 KCS 2009-02-18 . chapter 12*cackles* You be sure to do that, Doctor. Heehee.
One itsy thing, close to the end: Where it says "She nodded in return, and without further ado they cooperated in shifting him..." I think "they" would be "we," right?
Sorry, long day of teaching grammar. Pronouns, of all things, too. :)
I am very much looking forward to more of this! |
 Westron Wynde 2008-12-20 . chapter 11Muses are funny things - they come and go when they like, disappear when you're really in the mood for writing, and reappear when you don't have the time. Don't give up on her - and update whenever you can - I'm always glad to see more of this story :)
Good idea, Dr Watson! Getting him to solve the most intriguing riddle of all might reawaken the old Holmes we all know and love!
Great work :) |
 Wirral Bagpuss 2008-12-19 . chapter 11Hey nice to see some of Holmes's personality still in there somewhere :) Loved the part where Watson gives him the Strand Magazine stories !! If Holmes's memory does come back i am sure he will be swatting Watson over that ! LOL But poor Watson has had a hard time of it has'nt he. i do hope if Holmes's memory does come back he can give some comfort to Watson :)
Thank for your dedication, i was thrilled when i saw that !! :D |
 The Smart Cookie 2008-12-19 . chapter 11Even if it is short, you know how to warm up our appetite for more quite nicely. I LOVE the last few sentences, where Watson is over-explaining things to Holmes, and Holmes' subsequent reaction. I can't wait to see more of the process of Watson trying to restore Holmes' memory. I have a feeling it will be rather interesting. |
 KCS 2008-12-19 . chapter 11That last paragraph cracked me up. :D
I'm so glad to see this story again! Thank you! |
 The Smart Cookie 2008-11-22 . chapter 6Oh, I really love this story! Holmes' condition is clearly worrying to Dr. Watson, and yet I love how disarmingly... naive it's made Holmes, as opposed to his usual cold logic and biting sarcasm. Please update soon! You're doing a good job! |
 Westron Wynde 2008-11-18 . chapter 10“There is no one better for this task, I am sure.” Agreed!
Short or long, I always look forward to your updates :) |