*SNORT* *snicker* *laughs8 HILARIOUS! Thanks for the story! oO CHAKOTAy probably won't show up for days! hehehe Wish I could see the look on his face when he sees that!

I couldn't help but cackle. This was hilarious!

Nice story, however the 'family' bit it's even more interesting. How if Voyager's crew would call after Janeway and Chakotay "motehr" and "father"? Or even better: "grandmother" :-]

I don't really see KJ cackling, but as you say in the story the occasion called for it ;) I love how deliciously evil you make her in this story. I would exact similar revenge. Well written and nicely revealed :)

I enjoyed this. I personally can't see Janeway cackling, but as I read your story I found I couldn't care less. This is fun stuff, thanks!

I like the flow of your story, and the way you gradually revealed information to the reader. I also like the way you describe her cackling (as opposed to other forms of mirth) and her "witchy" qualities.

As for that time of month, it's like with werewolves: no woman can be held responsible for what happens during that time!

YOU LIVE! :D AND CONGRATULATIONS! :DD

Tre amusing ficlet this is. x] I've missed reading some good voyager fanfics :P

can you right more? will there be more?

very cute one shot!

Oh, what a pleasant surprise to get this in my inbox! I'm glad you're writing again. I can't wait for you to finish your J/C nursemaid fi anyways, sorry to be off topic.

This was great! Is the "only happened once a month when traveling through calm space . . ." a reference to what I think it is? hahaha

Congratulations on graduating!

Cute! I like humor between the command team

First of all, I'm SO glad to see you writing again, and I'm ecstatic you took this plot bunny and ran with it!

As for the story itself - hilarious. I LOVE that Chakotay guessed KJ's age wrong, and made her too old. That's just precious. And Chakotay intently - well, don't want to give it away - but that's so totally in character. Bet if she tried hard enough she could get a similar modern picture of him.

And I've never thought of KJ cackling, but it really fits, especially in this situation. Nice job! And I hope to see more soon! (Especially of your longfics...)