plse continue, what happens next?

Another fiction you say, and another joint account? Hell, I'll be swimming in reading material, which is just fine by me! Keep it up.

Keep going I want to know what happens

Great job!

I've read GI's United and Give in to the Night, and FB's The Future Begins and they're both great!

Keep it up you two!

Oh and by the way, GI, when are you going to start book 2 of United?

great story looking forward to the next chappy keep it up

this is looking really promising, hope the next update comes soon

Woohoo! new chapter! I think it's going great so far, you two!
I can't wait to see what will happen next, and what Saphira has planned as well. you guys make an awesome team!

HELL YA! Dude, we make one awesome team, homie! I thought my chapter was good as is, but the stuff you added in, insane! Kudos to the both of us

That's certainly and interesting way to transform Eragon. I only wonder whether Oromis was for or against Eragon the firsts punishment. He'll probably be against it and Saphira will have to beat the crap out of him to get the secret. It's also interesting to hear more about the first Eragon I always wondered what ever happened to him.

I like it.

So, by your standing, the original Eragon was in love with a dragon, like (section removed due to spoiling of fan-fiction for other readers who don't know what will happen). I'm pretty sure that Saphira will choose to transform (name removed). I can't wait to find out how dragons transform people.

Waiting for the next update (and not only from this story, Fb)
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Hm somehow I missed this story. I read united and checked under both your profiles and I couldn't find the story. Pure chance that I happened upon it otherwise I wouldn't have noticed it until chapter two. Well I liked this one picked up after Galbatorix and seems that Eragon is helping Roran rebuild his home. I'll bet that Eragon goes to Unconquerable just for the fun of it and then winds up getting turned into a dragon. I wonder what color you'll make him though *coughdiamondcough*.

An excellent beginning to hopefully an excellent story. Written by the two greatest eragon x saphira writers that i have read & I really hope between the two of you that you can update faster than both of your current stories.

This a must to read, the humor and romance in this, is rare like a late blooming rose, and i'll bet once it's finished, It'll have no rival.

I look for to reading more.

Great start, im really looking forward to reading more

This makes me think more about doing an 'after' fic. Hmm, maybe...

Fresh Blood, GI, great work.

Oh, and FB, sorry I haven't had the time to read your story. I keep hearing great things...

When I have time, it'll be the top of my list of things that must be done.