That was one HOT roller coaster ride !... I love it ! :)

I really liked this story. I'm not sure I could picture them at a fair or on a rollercoaster, but that part was really intense and I enjoyed it! I thought the second half was particularly strong... you captured both of their characters and emotions really well there.

that was a good one!..even though i dont think bella would have ever wiliingly gone for a coaster if she had done so with edward it would be like this.

It was nice and i enjoyed reading it!

Wow... That's all I can say. This story honestly gave me goosebumps! You really captured Edward's and Bella's characters, and even Charlie's, even though he only said two lines. Fantastic read, I love it! I'll most likely be back to re-read it, in fact. :)

Awesome story!

Aw...Sweet Story!

Wonderful as always! I love how you write BxE!

I absolutely love this.

You have such a beautiful way of writing. Keep up the awesome work!

Brilliant. Sexy. Fun. I loved this completely. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I am very, very happy now that I have read it, it makes me smile. Your work is great!

-Lili Vortex-

That was fun! I love it when Edward misbehaves a little bit. Please write more. Seriously. It's so hard to find good stuff like this.