How adorable!
Token/Kyle? I haven't seen that one!

Updattee! D: It's very good!

awesome story... i'm really liking it so far... update soon^^

xD lol he's ... gay LOL WTF!

This is great. Oh Stan, you klutz ♥
I'd love to read more of this fic!

o.o Now there's the profanity.

lol.

A very nice fic. :P I like the realism it brings. ^^

I'm really enjoying this so far. :D I think these two chapters are really good and except for a few grammar mistakes, I don't see anything wrong with them. (But since English isn't your native tounge, I forgive you for that. xP )

Anyway, just update a little sooner than a year from now, please. x3

omg that´s a story I´d thought never be updated again
I love it please keep on writing this. a little bit faster maybe? :-p

You guys. This story. Sorry, I'm going to have to get listy.

1. Mad props for continuing. This is one of the stories I've had in the back of my mind for, you know, a year, wondering every so often, 'What happened?' Frankly, I don't care what happened as long as it keeps happening this way. Thank you.

2. Yeah, yeah, it's only Kenny, fandom's second-favorite whipping-boy, but thank you for giving Stan a life outside of Kyle's house -- someone to talk to so the story has another voice outside of Stan and Kyle's wacky uh-oh! first-time-butler hijinks.

3. I'm very glad we bypassed a whole bunch of stuff about Stan's mom and leaning how to clean and stuff. Good editorial decision on your parts there.

4. Oh, the meat of the story. I hope this thing with Cartman's lawsuit is going to pan out into something of a plot thread. It's actually a really clever, grown-up way Cartman could antagonize Kyle assuming they were both adults and things like "You stupid Jew!" stopped being threatening. Just speculating, but if it turns out that Cartman actually has a case here, and Kyle is blindsided -- that could be a good source of drama, or something. Disregard if this is just me taking my fancies too far. Even so, another good choice.

5. Token and Kyle! Token and Kyle! Ah, see, I was wondering what that ominous phone call was last chapter. I think Token/Kyle is due for a glorious renaissance in this fandom. Honestly, if we're being realistic in the scope of this slashy AU, it makes good sense for upstanding, sensible (but delightfully snobby!) Token and unassuming, forgiving (to a point) Kyle to get together. I like this little snapshot of daily life, and how Stan's presence throws things off just enough to make it interesting.

6. And, well, yeah, it's sort of unfair of Kyle to get pissed about Passover. After all, how would Stan know? Poor kid.

7. Obviously, now the big question becomes why Stan is so thrown by Kyle's sexuality. And I eagerly await more details about Token/Kyle and I look forward to figuring out how Stan and Kyle get along (and together, one assumes).


I'm so happy you guys decided to come back to this. The fandom definitely needs more AU stories -- and it needs way more Fletset and Eishi. Thank you for continuing this!

I love your story
I can't wait for the next chapter ~ <3

I'd really like to see this continued!! Its very good and orginal!

Is this story still alive? *really hopes so* I am eager to see where this goes if it is still being worked on.

I like it!
(wants more)

please tell me you're writing more. :D

I'm very curious! Please continue!

Hey, ladies, I’m so sorry it took me a thousand years to review this!

Okay, I’m not sure how you two are writing--do you both collaborate on each chapter, or will you switch off, or what?--but I love what you have so far, and the tone is gorgeously consistent given the fact that it’s got multiple authoresses. The opening paragraphs are really nice. It’s comfortable and informative. Stan’s perspective was a good way to work in some back-story, and the flowers were a lovely use of imagery. I snapped to attention because they have contrasting connotations--roses being passion and morbidity, daffodils being freedom and buoyancy. Makes me wonder if there’s always going to be more than meets the eye in this story.

On that note, I really like the way this story begins with the cliché-breaker of Stan being Kyle’s subservient for once. Great job! Both of them are characterized nicely, too. Their first discussion is so flirty and lively and sly; I’m eager to see how their interactions evolve, especially since the whole employer-employee has the potential to be hilariously awkward, hypersexual, or anywhere in between. (Or both! Yeah!)

Last, I appreciate all the descriptions of the house. It’s always such a nice surprise when writers put effort into setting, let alone when it’s done with such attention! Thank you for taking the time to do that! This was an efficient beginning because most of the preliminary work is already done--we’ve got character introductions, a vivid venue, quality writing, and so many possible emergences of running themes.

I can’t wait to see where this goes. I love knowing that it won’t disappoint, because two awesome, competent writers are working their literary magic. Please continue soon!