Gotta love those last 3 lines.

Cute, but my favourite part was the "for you, my name is Karma" line. Hilarious! Perfect for the evil tensai.

Well... I know nothing about Prince of Tennis, but I really like your writing... So even though I'm quite confused about who these people are, I just had to review and tell you how much I liked it _ Great job!

I LOVED YOUR STORY! XD While reading the part on Fuji's thoughts, my heart really went out to him. But I am very very happy that Tezuka and Fuji are together in the end! :D

waahh! will u make a sequel for this! i love it man! gonna add this to my FAVORITE STORIES LIST! kYA

Good job on the conversations and feelings! You almost drove me to tears. I could feel the pain of departure as well as the shock and anger. I'm glad things worked out.

I didn't like Captain Atobe to begin with, and I really hated him after that Kantou match. I like how you expressed Fuji's expression towards it, especially when you had him mentioning "karma."

I like how you fit together the scenes regarding Captain Tezuka's decision of going to Germany. Actually, I didn't think Coach Sakaki told Captain Tezuka about the facility in Germany right after the match. I thought Coach Sakaki told Coach Ryuzaki first that day at Seigaku, then she later informed Captain Tezuka about it. In that scene, I got the idea that Captain Tezuka didn't know anything about the facility until that time. Well, we have our different interpretations, and I guess your way of interpretting it was necessary for the story.

There are some grammar errors, but not major.

Captain Tezuka and Oishi are not in the same class, but that's all right since there's not much information on that.

It's very very cute!

Good work! _

KINDA ANGSTY BUT VERY NICE...dang it my mom left the caps on again lol (ish to lazy to delete)

and fuji can be the oldest or the youngest, hes a leapyear baby so he can be 14 or...3...eiji teases him a lot lol

Wah, that was kinda angsty. I was panicking for a while b/c I thought they really were going to break up. It was so sweet yet sad when they made up. Ha ha, I feel sorry for Atobe :) Very nice!