I have read this story - maybe I am bored? - and occured a question? With the new regulas - you know: younglings become padawans later etc. - was Luke become padawan at nine. Maybe you are suggesting that he is a new Jedi Poster boy? Please answer! I am really curious.

I've been a fan of Yoda's Shadow and Shadows of the Sith since the beginning. I just discovered and read this version a few weeks ago. Oh my goodness, I loved the first one but this is so much better. The writing's better. The characters are better.

A lot of the little things that bugged me about the first one are gone. Where it used to seem that Elizbeth and Celia and Julia were only around to give Anakin more kids as if to make up for the suffering of the original time line, they now have things to do and stories that they're a part of, their characters are so much more developed. It also used to bug me that Cedirc was so young to be a father, but again you fixed that and made him a little bit older. The only thing I miss in this new version is getting to see the relationship between Cedric and Sev'rence grow. It's still in there, but it feels like it's not as much, I could be remembering wrong. That was one of my favorite from the original and I hope you can include some more of them together.

I am so impressed that you've taken on this mammoth rewriting and editing plan. I love the improvements and the ways you're tweaking the original story. I know that at least for me, editing especially on this scale is really boring and easy to loose momentum and quit. I just wanted to encourage you that you're doing a great job and tell you I hope you don't loose your steam and finish this. Keep up the good work!

I was reading the old version of ths story first. Already in the first cheapter can i see improvements. It's mutch easier to follow the stroy now.

Good work thanks

Hey awesome job on this story! Love your writting just so you know :)

Your doing a great job with the characters and making them real and believeable. great emotions and descriptions.

Cant wait to read more!

Jade

I really like the new chapter, especially the complex of the characters and how distinct they are. This is definitely among the best AU fanfictions here. Both Luke and Leia are interesting, and I am guess that Luke will be more of a general later on whereas Leia would be into politics.

However, some of the Skywalkers, such as Julia, seems to be a bit under-developed and does not really go anywhere. But perhaps she will play a more important role later on.

Awesome chapter, keep up the good work.
I'd prefer more scenes with Luke and Jasmine but I'm slightly biased i think, hehe.

Hope you update soon!

Glad for the update it has been a long time.At least it was a nice long one.Great though.

Poor Jaz. If she has memories of Luke reaming Mara she will be scarred for life.

Yay longness!

Nice story so far.

Too many to think about. Gets confusing.

This is a great chapter.I seem to be confused about whats going on with everybody,especially Liz talking to a dead what,,her being a Sentinel.Very interesting.Why is everyone loosing there memories.I guess I need to read back some chapters I guess.

Another good chapter. Really the only downside about this fic so far is the long time between updates (not essentially a bad thing) and the fact that you haven't introduced Kyp yet.

Also a question, who is guiding Liz to become a sentinel? Just some nameless Jedi or is he referenced somewhere?

At least Anakin is/was settling in better than his children were... but then again, he did have some memories to guide him as opposed to his children who had none.

Great chapter!

Hopefully, Ash understands from his conversation with Master Yoda about why he wasn't allowed to go with Anakin to Garos; especially, if Maul is really the reason, for it.
Besides, it's also obvious that Ash has noticed that there's something different about his Master, as well. Which leads to the question, will Ash do what Master Yoda advises and meditates to find the answers, he's looking for?

Anyway, it sounds like Leia was confiding in Aayla--about the different timelines; which is a good thing. Leia still needs someone to talk to about it; especially, if she's having issues with dealing with her dad.

So Sev’rance Tann and Cedric--just happen to be on the same planet, at the same time; talk about major coincidence.
Curious, will the two run into each other? And if so, will it cause a confrontation between the two? Very curious, indeed.

I like the fact, that you've brought Ahsoka into the story; she really seems to be there a lot, for the Skywalker family; especially, for her old Master. Yet it also sounds liek Ahsoka hasn't loss her enthusiasm for causing some type of mischief; especially, after the little conversation between herself and Anakin.

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Ahsoka got a calculating look on her face. “No,” he said to his former Padawan.

“You don’t even know what I was thinking,” she chastised him.

“I don’t have to. I know that look. It spells trouble, doom and havoc for whoever you are directing it toward. I don’t need that.”

“I wasn’t going to direct doom, havoc or trouble at you, Master,” she said petulantly.

“I want no part of whatever scheme you’re cooking up. Clear?”

She set her features in the way that he knew meant she would just think up another way to get around his prohibition. “If you think that best, Master.”

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Anyway, I'm curious what caused for Luke and Jasmine to get knocked-out? Not to mention, why is it hard for the two of them to initiate a Padawan-Master bond, just between the two of them? That's very curious, as well.

Can't wait to find out, what'll happen next.
So, looking forward to more. Until then.