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abarai4
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
" I just can't seem to get away from this pairing. "

Me neither.

I really like your writing style - it gives the reader the idea of development, and the passage of time becomes more "visual".

This one is not as sad as your other Ulquihime fanfic, but it's still sad anyway. And awesome.

Congratulations!
Waffleness
2009-11-17 . chapter 1
The way you write UlquiorraOrihime is so realistic I could almost imagine it coming true.

I love your stories and I wish there were more but all in all, this one was just too good. Through Endless Sands was another one of my favorites. I haven't found another author who writes this pairing as good as you do!
Felling
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Great-job. I loved that. ~
AlleluiaElizabeth
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
I swear when he said "You can't carry me, Orihime." my heart jumped a little. o.o That was such a great line. In fact, a great scene because it wouldn't have had that kind of effect if the lead up hadn't been perfect too.

Really, excellent fic. :)
lotus-bugxm9
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
It's still tottaly not fair he's gone;( i would have killed over in joy if something had happned between them as they would have made such a shocking awesome paring!! good story.
soulberry
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
i like the dialogues , and their point of view of the world . those questions seem destined to have no solid answer to me . you potrayed their personality nicely in this fic! i like it! ^.^
Merciless Ruby
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Cute but sad one shot. Loved it!
Hai aieru
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
so good! and well characterized.
thanx-for-da-energy
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Oh wow I really liked this story A LOT, I'm normally into different kinds of pairings, but change is good, and very refreshing. I enjoyed reading this story a lot, and you did an awesome job on it! b^.^d Thanks again for this awesome story! :D
Alyson Metallium
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
Very nice one shot, I loved the pacing of it and the characterization. You capitalized on Ulquiorra's curiosity (that we ALL know was there through the whole thing) and expanded on the duality of his and Orihime's natures.

I have to ask, was the nod to "The Last Unicorn" deliberate? Because it was a lovely touch, since that's another story dealing a bit with forbidden love. Or am I reading too much into things?

Wonderfully enjoyable, thanks!
RicaNG
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
Wonderful story! I loved how you captured the essence of Ulquiorra & Orihime's relationship! Sweet ending!
Lechu
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
I'm crying.
...
Thank for this breathtaking fic.
Althia9
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
*sniff*
Beautiful!
T^T
*claps*
Twi-Hoster girl
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
that was so beautiful and sad! i loved this story so much!!
Techno
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
Oh, that was so beautiful. The ending made me want to cry T-T

You made Orihime's and Ulquiorra's interactions interesting.

Good job ^^
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