Romantic, tender, well done.

Hello! I liked your story but i found out another one that is word to word. since your story is the oldest one, i assumed you are the writer. so, here's the link:

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I LOVED this! The voice of Edward here sounds a lot like it did in Midnight Sun, so it really seemed to work. And the way you represented their first time together seems like this could have very well been that missing scene. Great job!

Wow.

That was EXTREMELY well-written! I totally agree with the person who compared this to the "Bella & Edward Porns". I'll admit, I do enjoy meaningless smut now and again, but you really captured the intense passion that Edward and Bella share, and for that, I salute you! Please please please PLEASE write more. You're an amazing writer!

-Ally

Wow.

First of all, well done!

It was all really well written, it was as though I was there. Which made my cheeks turn a nice shade of pink. Haha.

Second of all.. I think it was brilliant how you captured Edward in this story, with the worrying and such. You really feel for him at the end.. You can imagine what he's feeling.. You can see him sitting there. It comes close to breaking your heart.

Anyway! Once again, fantastic job!

Simply brilliant.

Wow this was amazing! AS if it was written by steph meyer herself! Good job! Its soo much better than all those graphic bella and edward porns people have been throwing out there! I cant even describe how much i love this!