*inserts awesomeface here*

CONTINUE! NAO!

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I was laughing when I read this part: Alyx pouted. “No! Daddy, he didn’t find me, he dragged me away from the alium I found! I was gonna fight him for you but Mister Freeman wouldn’t let me! Now they’re all gonna take over the world, Mister Freeman, and it’s all your fault, so I won’t say thank you, not once!”

I stop to laugh and read it again. At all, Alyx got the reason. At least that really happend. It was very good.

I love your story. Is funny thought about that Gordon and Alyx met all lot of time before Half Life 2. and I also love the way you make Alyx personality (I imagine her just like that!)

Quite excellent, this story is, a fave for me. I think you got Alyx's junior personality correctly, (at least that's how I imagine her!) I don't see any problems with your AU-ness and your description is great. Would love to see this be continued!

Oh, I just love this part:
“Clear.”
“Clear.”
“Not clear-- oh wait, that’s a broom.”
“Rookie!"
“Fine, clear!”
Cracked me up.

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yeah, might as well go all the way - it's fun :D
nice chapter!

Keep up the good work.

Two Thumbs up.

yay Barney!
I hope there's more of this.
and when this part is done it would be interesting to see what happens when Alyx and Gordon meet again in HL2, since Gordon doesn't say anything in the game.

awesome idea! cute too.

I love this story, you need to write more.

Nice. Very Nice. You did an immpressive job! :)

Any fic that gets graced by the G-Man, gets graced by a review! Actually, when I saw the 'daughter to work' and 'noncanon' in the summary, I wondered if you had put Eli and Alyx in the Appature Science Portal project.