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WeHaveACase
2009-07-12 . chapter 2
Hey there, been reading a lot of your stuff. I love this story! Very realistic for them. Please don't abandon it! Update soon please?
fanofbones
2008-12-02 . chapter 2
god, thats just so sweet the way he touches her stomach...wow...
I love in-her-face-Booth...
I'm sure you will make this all better in time for Christmas ;)
still crazy about this girl

fab
Aglozz
2008-11-22 . chapter 2
WOW! I think you're telling this story in a very realistic way! I love it and can't wait for more! You're doing a really good job with this!
Kshar
2008-11-20 . chapter 2
Excellent characterization; I absolutely believe that's how the characters would react in this situation. I especially like how well you write Booth, and I loved this line:

"God only knew, he thought, how two people managed to drum up so much angst and drama between them, but they were aces at it. Certified, pin-the-blue-ribbon-on-them champions."
kmmp99
2008-11-18 . chapter 2
Of course they will figure it out! They're B&B and they always figure it out! :-)

Excellent chap Ana! I think you are portraying Brennan's reaction to the pregnancy very well!
iamwriter
2008-11-17 . chapter 2
so glad you continued with this story, cant wait to see where it goes.
HawkAngel XD
2008-11-16 . chapter 2
I just hope that between them, everything is going to be okay... update soon please

HawkAngel
ehliza
2008-11-16 . chapter 2
Oh I soo fell in love with this story and am a little speechless right now :). But keep going, it's really great.
bb-4ever
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
great fic so far. don't push him too hard bones he's there for you!. will they sort themselves out? look forward to more soon
Lifeguard
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
Wow, that was beautifully written! You have a way with words that makes this story very unique! I am waiting in anticipation to read the next chapter.
MoonlightGardenias
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
There are quite a few "Brennan gets pregnant" stories out there, but I don't think I've read one like this. The others are usually kind of OOC, or have them happy after a matter of days. But I don't think Brennan would be like that. I think that, realistically, she would be opposed to the idea for a while. That doesn't mean that she'd change her mind about things, but it takes Brennan a while to process and evaluate the evidence.

Anyway, a great job thus far and I definitely look forward to more.
mustanggirlz07
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
Absolutely beautiful chapter. It was definitely worth the wait. Excellent job writing this chapter. You did a wonderful job keeping them in character with Brennan pushing Booth away or acting scared and with Booth as well. Lovely story so far. Keep it up. :)
addtcdtobones
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
ana...as usual...it is beautiful...even with the angst...but you know me...all about the fluff...i know...i know...how boring the stories would be if they all had happy endings...thats not real life...well these are in fact fan fiction...not true...so can we please have some fluffy...just a little...not that it isnt good right now...hee hee...

fantabulous woman...as freakin always...
kclover
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
LOVE this so far. Please continue :)
Laurenmlbc
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
Ha, Nothing is easy with them, is it? It never will be either, they are just too different. They have such wonderful chemistry though, it's great. Awesome job with the flashback, very well written!
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