Hiya!

Aaw, cute. I love brotherly fluff, and you write it so well! Yes, your grammar was a little incorrect, but since English isn't your first language I thought you did a brilliant job! If you ever need a beta, I would be happy to oblige. But keep up the good work. Well done.

Little Miss Bump xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

A lovely one-shot between two brothers even though one is evil he is still capable of showing his emotions of protectiveness towards his younger sibling and vice versa with Chris.

We all know that Leo is a selfish * so this is nothing new.

But to be so cruel and vidictive to actually tell your child -your own flesh and blood that he is not even worth his time and attention.

That was very good,
I really enjoyed it poor Chris,
but aww what a lovely brother bond :)

No that's okay I like it ^^ Though, actually Leo said someone more horrible to him "you 're nothing"...It's not even nobody! He is being denied being a person!

Anyway, continue^^

what i think? well i think that somebody shoul (sorry the grammar i cant with this verb) kick leo´s ** so hard for telling that to chris that´s what i think
now that i say that awesome story

God, the ending was fantastic!

Um couldn't you've done like a 2-shot or a 10-shot maybe?

I wish Wyatt heard what Chris said even if he is frozen.

I loved this story. Leo was so mean but the scences between Chris and Wyatt were great.

Brillient story! I loved this alot. Even though Wyatt was evil, he still came to his baby brother that is so sweet. I think the ending of the story was a bit too short, but it was great. I mean he told his brother he loved him and he left with proof that his brother could still be saved!
-Rogue