V. good fic. I think you did Ronnie and Vic perfectly. Ronnie's lost his conscience since Lem died but it was Vic that shoved him over the edge. And, I think, Vic sorta sees that he did the same thing to Shane which is why he tried to get Shane out of the ambush.

So I think you did fine. :-)

yeah, the shield fanfiction!
you don't know how long I waited to read a new story! I could kiss you for this ;-)

the story is really great, can't wait to read more from you!