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SithMistress
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
First, I am so glad someone else likes this pairing too!

Second, the line " “It’s the reason I fly.” Starscream replied, then gave Prowl a silly grin. “And you’re the reason I land.” " was probably my most loved line from the entire thing. So sugar sweet my teeth hurt xP But really, /mush

Third! The end was wonderful! Oh Jazz, smooth really.

Great job ^__^
Nightwind
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
I don't usually review stories here because, quite frankly, I'm too lazy and, often, I don't have much that's nice to say, so though that is. But I feel compelled to say that I very much enjoyed this (and your other stories with these two), and that was, to be very honest, completely unexpected. I decided to read this story for the "crack" aspect, but I have to say that you did surprisingly well justifying these two, so much so that, by the end, it didn't seem like crack at all, and I was feeling all mooshy-gooshy. :)

I realize that you wrote these stories a while ago, but if you have more, I'm all ears. Or eyes, as the case may be. :) Thanks for sharing.
Mirage Shinkiro
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
It's totally a crack pairing, and yet it's so believable here. You totally pulled this off. It's quite a lovely story.
Dvana
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
How unexpectedly sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
Katanagirl16
2008-11-06 . chapter 1
OMG! That was great, I love that song!
starscream girl
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
i like how starscream curses
AMAPADME
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
I liked this one a lot. good premis for a starting relationship. I also think Prowl/Starscream is an interesting couple.
Murder Junkie
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
I have NEVER read a fic with Starscream acting as the voice of reason. And I've read a lot of Screamer fanfiction. Even with this being a partial songfic (hate them with a blinding passion) I still very much enjoyed it. That you didn't list it as a songfic may have helped... Wouldn't have even clicked it, then. But as I did read this, and it is quite original in a slowly stagnating fandom, I have to admit it was a good way to spend my morning. Very well written.
Carmilla DeWinter
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
This is an interesting approach at that particularl pairing (what can I say? I'll quote another reviewer - I really didn't need another 'ship.)

I like the interactions - however, it would be nice to see that this happens on Cybertron from the beginning. You had me terminally confused for a while, because the "Earth-Starscream" should have slightly different thought processes, and might not even have tried to keep Prowl from defecting.
Cat in the web
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
This is really good! I like this pairing and you got it to work nicely.
Cascadia-science
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
It was excellent and an enjoyable read.
Saberfrost
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
That was so cute!
I hope theres more, I really enjoyed this fic and there isn't much of this couple so I was happy to stumble across it!
HitokiriKurisuta
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
^chuckles^ Well, that was... certainly interesting. XD I love how you played Jazz in this. He was hilarious.

Mm~, Screamy an' Prowler are so lovely together, aren't they? :3
PyroP-Dawg
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
...I didn't need another ship. Really.

You wrote that really well, though. Awesome story.
Bluebird Soaring
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
Very well done for a unique pairing =) We never do hear why Prowl is trying to throw himself off the cliff (unless it was what was driving him to want to defect as well - he'd lost faith in his own cause?) But somehow you kept Starscream in character as well. Add a bit of Jazz and his own brand of "help" (I loved his shooting Screamer down to talk to him!) and you have a very interesting story!
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