Tee He HEe oreos and peanutbutter!

this story is so cute! :) keep up the good work!

Whoa
That had me on the edge of my seat.
I was just WAITING for something to happen.
THen nothing does, but I'm not diappointed because the whole thing is just so...weird.

aww totemo kawaii! great story!!

You've done it again! You've captured a hidden, cute friendship between Kai and Tala that dishes out more character and non-verbal interaction that shows just how close these two can be as simply firends, or borderline-rivals, at least. You've just proven that they're more of the, "Actions speaks louder than words," guys and just how good they know each other. The other's reactions were pretty satisfactory too. Another awsome, admirable fic*Sighs* I wish I could make a Tala/Demolition Boys fic as easily as your writting lets on!>-

Wow. I really like this one. I love the little details of Kai and Tala's food exchange, the quirks they have for certain food, and augh so many things at the same time. I love, love this! I think it's also pretty cute that they know what to eat, what follows after that and how to end it without even saying anything.

that souch a cute story

that was good and funny..XD

do you have more of this type of fics..?

Miako6

lol, I love this fic!

EXCELLENT!

Aww I love the last sentence. It's so sweet! It's so nice to have best frineds like that.

That is a very interesting story. The ending is nice and quaint. Great job!

This. Is. So. SO. Cute!!
I love the idea of them exchanging a quarter of their muffins without even speaking. ^_^
Really interesting fic, great work! =D

Interesting idea for a story (and yay! BEYBLADE) but I have a couple points:
The tense was jarring and distracted me from the story. There was more telling than showing.
Nonetheless, I enjoyed the fic. A innovative and quirky spin on the Kai/Tala friendship, well-written but with polishing, it can be awesome!

This was a very interesting and original idea. It seemed boring at first, but in the end I really liked it. It shows a strong bond between Kai and Tala, and I love that. Great story!