I love this story, I have always found Erik to be an unappriciated character like Scott. Both were madse s 2dimensional.

hehe 4 once scott turns bad. but dun make him 3 bad pls

I am not sure if I disliked or liked this.

Magneto's characterisation was good - he is a manipulative bastard, who can use the truth and half-truth for whatever reason he wants for.

However you ignored the comics' canon. I know it wasn't in the movie, but a little googling would have helped to know that Scott's parents died in an air crash; that Magnus and Charles met in Izrael...

It killed Scott's characterisation.

Wow, i didnt expect that ending, that was amazing! Intriguing to think that Scott would just drop what he thought was real all his life but it made a lot of sense in a way, i love how you handled it, an unexpected twist from an innocent enough meeting. Great work, keep it up!

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Another good one. :-) Scott and Magnus are two of my favorites.

Very different. I kinda liked it.

Neva likes this so much. There aren't enough anti-Xavier movieverse stories. Maybe you could write a sequel?

it was different...I liked. :)

*wow* v poiganat and different:)

Well, I'll be damned! I coulda SWORN this was called , not let's-write-a-story-SOLELY-for-phoenixqueen' ! If you like Cyke as a perfect *sswipe, YOU write a story with Cyke as a perfect *sswipe. Geez! I see "hateration" is like anthrax - an AIRBORNE VIRUS! I was about to go and write anothe chapter to my sh*t, but I suppose I should ask pq1010's permession and ideas, right? Bullsh*t. Nadja, shake the haters OFF!

Sorry for the flame, but I like Cyclopes. Why would you make him, think he has been mislead? And why would you make Xavier sound like nothing more than an idealist and a dreamer? I really didn't like this story.